Rau ntau tus neeg sau ntawv, cov dab neeg luv luv lossis cov dab neeg luv luv yog qhov nruab nrab haum. Tsis zoo li kev sau ntawv tshiab uas yog txoj haujlwm nyuaj, txhua tus tuaj yeem sau zaj dab neeg luv luv thiab - qhov tseem ceeb tshaj plaws - ua kom tiav. Zoo li cov ntawv tshiab, zaj dab neeg luv luv zoo yuav ua rau tus nyeem tau kov thiab lom zem. Los ntawm kev sau cov tswv yim, sau lawv, thiab kho lawv, koj tuaj yeem kawm tam sim los sau cov dab neeg luv luv.
Kauj ruam
Ntu 1 ntawm 3: Sib Sau Cov Tswv Yim
Kauj Ruam 1. Tsim cov phiaj xwm lossis xwm txheej
Xav txog zaj dab neeg uas yuav ua thiab dab tsi yuav tshwm sim hauv zaj dab neeg. Xav txog yam koj tab tom sim tshaj tawm lossis ua piv txwv. Txiav txim siab txog txoj hauv kev lossis qhov pom ntawm zaj dab neeg.
- Piv txwv li, koj tuaj yeem pib nrog cov phiaj xwm yooj yim, piv txwv li, tus yam ntxwv tseem ceeb yuav tsum ua nrog cov xov xwm tsis zoo lossis tus cwj pwm tseem ceeb tau txais kev tsis txaus siab los ntawm phooj ywg lossis tus neeg hauv tsev neeg.
- Koj tseem tuaj yeem sim tsim cov phiaj xwm nyuaj, xws li lub cim tseem ceeb sawv hauv qhov sib luag, lossis tus cwj pwm tseem ceeb nrhiav lwm tus neeg qhov tsaus ntuj.
Kauj Ruam 2. Tsom ntsoov rau tus cwj pwm tseem ceeb uas nyuaj
Feem ntau cov dab neeg luv luv tsom mus rau ib lossis ntau ntawm ob lub cim tseem ceeb. Xav txog tus cwj pwm tseem ceeb uas muaj lub siab nyiam lossis xav tau, tab sis kuj tseem muaj qhov tsis sib xws. Tsis txhob cia cov cim zoo lossis tsis zoo. Muab koj lub cim tseem ceeb nthuav tus yam ntxwv thiab kev xav kom lawv xav tias nyuaj thiab tag nrho.
- Koj tuaj yeem siv tib neeg tiag hauv koj lub neej los ua kev tshoov siab rau tus yam ntxwv tseem ceeb. Lossis koj tuaj yeem pom cov neeg tsis paub nyob hauv zej tsoom thiab siv lawv tus yam ntxwv rau koj tus yam ntxwv tseem ceeb.
- Piv txwv li, tej zaum koj tus yam ntxwv tseem ceeb yog tus ntxhais hluas uas xav tiv thaiv nws tus niam hluas los ntawm kev thab plaub hauv nws lub tsev kawm ntawv, tab sis kuj tseem xav tau txais los ntawm nws lwm tus phooj ywg hauv tsev kawm ntawv. Los yog tej zaum koj tus yam ntxwv tseem ceeb yog tus txiv neej laus laus uas pib ua phooj ywg nrog nws cov neeg nyob sib ze, tab sis tig mus koom nrog hauv kev ua txhaum cai.
Kauj Ruam 3. Tsim kom muaj kev sib cav hauv nruab nrab rau tus yam ntxwv tseem ceeb
Txhua zaj dab neeg luv luv zoo muaj qhov teeb meem hauv nruab nrab, uas yog, tus yam ntxwv tseem ceeb yuav tsum ntsib teeb meem. Qhia qhov kev tsis sib haum xeeb rau tus yam ntxwv tseem ceeb thaum pib ntawm koj zaj dab neeg luv luv. Ua rau koj tus yam ntxwv tseem ceeb lub neej nyuaj lossis nyuaj.
Piv txwv li, tej zaum koj tus cwj pwm muaj kev mob siab rau lossis xav tau uas nyuaj rau ua tiav. Los yog tej zaum koj tus yam ntxwv tseem ceeb raug ntes hauv qhov xwm txheej tsis zoo lossis txaus ntshai thiab yuav tsum nrhiav txoj hauv kev kom muaj sia nyob
Kauj Ruam 4. Xaiv keeb kwm nthuav
Lwm qhov tseem ceeb hauv zaj dab neeg luv luv yog qhov teeb tsa lossis qhov chaw uas zaj dab neeg tshwm sim. Koj tuaj yeem siv ib qho kev teeb tsa tseem ceeb rau zaj dab neeg luv luv thiab ntxiv cov ntsiab lus keeb kwm yav dhau los rau cov cim hauv zaj dab neeg. Xaiv keeb kwm yav dhau los uas txaus siab rau koj kom koj tuaj yeem ua rau nws txaus siab rau tus nyeem ntawv.
- Piv txwv li, tsim ib zaj dab neeg hauv tsev kawm theem siab hauv koj lub tebchaws. Los yog tsim ib zaj dab neeg hauv pawg me me ntawm Mars.
- Tsis txhob sim them nyiaj ntau nrog cov keeb kwm sib txawv kom tsis txhob cuam tshuam rau tus nyeem ntawv. Feem ntau, ib mus rau ob qhov chaw txaus rau ib zaj dab neeg luv luv.
Kauj Ruam 5. Xav txog lub ntsiab lus tshwj xeeb
Ntau zaj dab neeg luv luv nyob ntawm ib lub ntsiab lus thiab tshawb nws los ntawm qhov pom ntawm tus piav qhia lossis tus yam ntxwv tseem ceeb. Koj tuaj yeem siv lub ntsiab lus dav xws li "kev hlub," "xav tau," lossis "poob," thiab xav txog nws los ntawm koj tus yam ntxwv tseem ceeb lub ntsiab lus.
Koj tseem tuaj yeem tsom mus rau lub ntsiab lus tshwj xeeb xws li "kev hlub ntawm cov nus muag", "lub siab xav tsim kev phooj ywg", lossis "poob niam txiv"
Kauj Ruam 6. Tsim kom muaj qhov siab tshaj plaws
Txhua qhov dab neeg luv luv zoo muaj lub sijhawm xav tsis thoob thaum tus yam ntxwv tseem ceeb mus txog qhov siab tshaj plaws. Qhov nce siab feem ntau tshwm sim thaum kawg ntawm zaj dab neeg lossis ze rau qhov kawg ntawm zaj dab neeg. Thaum qhov kawg, tus cwj pwm tseem ceeb zoo li ntxhov siab, raug kaw, tsis muaj kev cia siab, lossis txawm tias tsis muaj kev tswj hwm.
Piv txwv, tsim kom muaj qhov siab tshaj plaws thaum tus yam ntxwv tseem ceeb, tus txiv neej laus laus kho siab, yuav tsum tawm tsam nrog nws cov neeg zej zog txog nws cov haujlwm tsis raug cai. Lossis tsim qhov kev xav siab tshaj thaum tus yam ntxwv tseem ceeb, tus ntxhais hluas, tiv thaiv nws tus viv ncaus tiv thaiv kev thab plaub ntawm nws lub tsev kawm ntawv
Kauj Ruam 7. Tsim kom muaj qhov sib tw lossis qhov xav tsis thoob
Tuaj nrog cov tswv yim xaus uas yuav ua rau xav tsis thoob, co, lossis xav txog koj cov neeg nyeem. Zam qhov kawg uas pom tseeb dhau lawm kom tus nyeem ntawv tuaj yeem kwv yees qhov xaus ua ntej. Muab cov neeg nyeem tsis nkag siab txog kev nyab xeeb thaum lawv xav tias lawv tuaj yeem kwv yees qhov xaus, tom qab ntawd qhia lawv txoj kev mloog mus rau lwm tus ua cim lossis cov duab tsis txaus ntseeg.
Zam kev ua phem ntawm qhov kawg ntawm zaj dab neeg, piv txwv li tsis txhob cia siab rau clichéd lossis paub cov phiaj xwm sib tw ua rau cov neeg nyeem xav tsis thoob. Tsim kev tsis txaus ntseeg thiab tsis txaus ntseeg hauv zaj dab neeg kom koj cov neeg nyeem yuav xav tsis thoob thaum lawv mus txog qhov kawg ntawm zaj dab neeg
Kauj Ruam 8. Nyeem cov piv txwv ntawm cov dab neeg luv luv
Kawm paub dab tsi ua rau zaj dab neeg luv luv ua tiav thiab nyiam cov neeg nyeem los ntawm kev saib piv txwv los ntawm cov kws txawj sau ntawv. Nyeem dab neeg luv luv los ntawm ntau yam, los ntawm cov ntawv sau dab neeg, ntawv tseeb, mus rau kev npau suav. Pom tias tus neeg sau siv cov cim, ntsiab lus, teeb tsa, thiab cov phiaj xwm los tsim cov txiaj ntsig zoo ntawm nws zaj dab neeg luv luv. Koj tuaj yeem nyeem:
- "Tus pojniam nrog Tus dev" los ntawm Anton Chekhov
- "Ib yam kuv tau txhais lub ntsiab lus rau koj" los ntawm Alice Munro
- "Rau Esme-Nrog Kev Hlub thiab Squalor" los ntawm JD Salinger
- "Lub suab xob quaj" los ntawm Ray Bradbury
- "Snow, Apple, Glass" los ntawm Neil Gaiman
- "Brokeback Roob" los ntawm Annie Proulx
- "Xav" los ntawm Grace Paley
- "Apollo" los ntawm Chimamanda Ngozi Adichie
- "Nov yog Li Cas Koj Poob Nws" los ntawm Junot Diaz
- "Xya" los ntawm Edwidge Danticat
Ntu 2 ntawm 3: Tsim Thawj Daim Qauv
Kauj Ruam 1. Tsim cov phiaj xwm phiaj xwm
Npaj cov phiaj xwm ntawm zaj dab neeg luv luv hauv tsib ntu: nthuav tawm, pib, npaj ua ntej, nce qib, phiaj xwm nqis, thiab daws teeb meem. Siv cov txheej txheem los siv thaum sau cov dab neeg luv luv kom ntseeg tau tias muaj qhov pib pom meej, cov ntsiab lus, thiab xaus.
Koj tseem tuaj yeem siv cov txheej txheem snowflake; uas yog ib kab lus xaus, ib nqe lus luv luv, cov ntsiab lus ntawm txhua tus cim hauv zaj dab neeg, thiab cov lus tshwm sim
Kauj Ruam 2. Tsim kom qhib tau zoo
Kev qhib ntawm zaj dab neeg luv luv yuav tsum muaj qhov kev nqis tes ua, teeb meem, lossis cov duab tsis txawv txav kom nyiam mloog ntawm tus nyeem ntawv. Qhia tus yam ntxwv tseem ceeb thiab teeb tsa rau tus nyeem ntawv hauv thawj kab lus. Kom tus nyeem ntawv nkag mus rau lub ntsiab lus lossis lub tswv yim ntawm zaj dab neeg.
- Qhib kab lus xws li, piv txwv li: “Kuv xav tias nyob ib leeg hnub ntawd” tsis qhia tus nyeem ntawv ntau txog tus piav thiab yog neeg ntiaj teb lossis tsis txaus siab.
- Sim ua kab lus qhib zoo li no: "Hnub uas kuv tus poj niam tso kuv tseg, kuv tau khob qhov rooj ntawm tus neeg nyob ze kom nug seb nws puas muaj piam thaj rau lub ncuav mog qab zib kuv yuav tsis ci." Kab lus no qhia rau tus nyeem ntawv txog kev tsis sib haum xeeb yav dhau los, nws tus poj niam tawm mus, thiab kev nruj ntawm tus neeg piav qhia thiab nws cov neeg nyob sib ze.
Kauj Ruam 3. Siv ib qho kev pom xwb
Cov dab neeg luv luv feem ntau siv thawj tus neeg pom thiab tsuas yog siv ib qho kev pom. Qhov no pab cov dab neeg luv luv kom pom tseeb thiab pom kev. Koj tseem tuaj yeem sau cov dab neeg luv luv rau tus neeg thib peb, txawm hais tias qhov no tuaj yeem tsim qee qhov nrug ntawm koj thiab tus nyeem ntawv.
- Qee cov dab neeg tau sau ua tus neeg thib ob, thaum tus piav qhia siv lo lus "koj." Qhov no feem ntau tsuas yog siv thaum tus neeg thib ob tseem ceeb rau cov lus piav qhia, piv txwv li hauv Ted Chiang zaj dab neeg luv luv, "Dab Neeg ntawm Koj Lub Neej", lossis Junot Diaz zaj dab neeg luv luv, "Qhov no Koj Yuav Tsum Nws Li Cas."
- Cov dab neeg luv luv feem ntau tau sau yav dhau los, txawm hais tias koj tuaj yeem sau lawv hauv lub sijhawm tam sim no los muab kev xav tam sim no.
Kauj Ruam 4. Siv kev sib tham los nthuav tawm cov cim thiab txav cov phiaj xwm
Kev sib tham hauv zaj dab neeg luv luv yuav tsum qhia ntau dua ib yam. Nco ntsoov tias kev sib tham caw tus nyeem ntawv kom paub tus yam ntxwv uas tab tom tham thiab ntxiv qee yam rau zaj dab neeg. Siv cov lus sib tham los nthuav qhia cov cim thiab ntxiv kev nruj rau qhov xwm txheej lossis teeb meem.
- Piv txwv li, tsis txhob sau kab lus zoo li, "Hav, koj nyob li cas?" sim sau koj tus cwj pwm lub suab. Koj tuaj yeem sau, "Hav, koj nyob li cas?" lossis "Koj nyob qhov twg? Muaj pes tsawg xyoo uas peb tsis tau pom dua?"
- Sim siv cov ntsiab lus sib tham zoo li "nws hais lus tsis meej," "Kuv yws yws," lossis "nws quaj" ua tus yam ntxwv. Es tsis txhob sau ntawv "'Koj nyob qhov twg?' Nws hais", zoo dua "'Koj nyob qhov twg?' Nws hais ntxiv" lossis "'Koj nyob qhov twg?'
Kauj Ruam 5. Suav nrog cov ncauj lus ntxaws ntxaws rau hauv keeb kwm yav dhau
Xav txog huab cua, suab, saj, hnov tsw, thiab tus yam ntxwv tseem ceeb pom. Kos qhov teeb tsa siv koj qhov kev nkag siab kom nws zoo li muaj sia rau tus nyeem ntawv.
Piv txwv li, koj yuav sim piav qhia koj lub tsev kawm ntawv yav dhau los ua "lub tsev lag luam zoo li lub tsev uas ua rau cov thom khwm hws, tshuaj tsuag plaub hau, tsis npau suav, thiab chalk." Lossis koj tuaj yeem sim piav qhia lub ntuj nyob hauv koj lub tsev tias "daim ntawv tsis puv uas muaj cov pa luam yeeb dub, los ntawm cov hluav taws kub nyob ze lub tsev thaum sawv ntxov."
Kauj Ruam 6. Xaus nrog kev paub lossis nthuav tawm
Kev paub lossis nthuav tawm tsis tas yuav tsum loj thiab tsis meej pem. Koj tuaj yeem ua nws maj mam, thaum koj tus xeeb ceem pib hloov lossis pom yam txawv. Koj tuaj yeem xaus zaj dab neeg nrog kev tshwm sim uas qhib rau kev txhais lus lossis daws thiab pom meej.
- Koj kuj tseem tuaj yeem xaus nrog daim duab txaus nyiam lossis kev sib tham uas qhia txog kev hloov pauv ntawm tus cwj pwm.
- Piv txwv, xaus zaj dab neeg thaum tus cwj pwm tseem ceeb txiav txim siab qhia nws tus neeg nyob ze, txawm tias nws txhais tau tias nws yuav plam phooj ywg. Los yog piav qhia qhov xaus nrog tus yam ntxwv tseem ceeb nqa nws tus kwv yau uas raug ntaus ntawm nws txoj kev mus tsev, tsuas yog ua ntej noj hmo.
Ntu 3 ntawm 3: Ua Kom Draft
Kauj Ruam 1. Nyeem koj zaj dab neeg luv luv
Mloog lub suab ntawm txhua kab lus, tshwj xeeb yog kev sib tham. Daim ntawv ceeb toom yog tias cov dab neeg ntws zoo los ntawm kab lus rau kab lus. Tshawb xyuas kab lus sib txawv lossis kab lus thiab sau kab lus kom lawv thiaj li tuaj yeem hloov kho tom qab.
- Daim ntawv ceeb toom yog tias koj zaj dab neeg ua raws cov phiaj xwm phiaj xwm thiab muaj qhov tsis sib haum xeeb ntawm cov cim tseem ceeb.
- Nyeem ib zaj dab neeg nrov tuaj yeem pab pom qhov sau tsis raug, qauv sau ntawv, lossis cim kab cim yuam kev.
Kauj Ruam 2. Rov kho koj cov dab neeg luv luv kom pom meej dua thiab ntws
Cov dab neeg luv luv feem ntau yog ntawm 1,000 thiab 7,000 lo lus, lossis nruab nrab ntawm ib thiab kaum nplooj ntawv ntev. Tsis txhob ntshai txiav scenes lossis tshem kab lus kom luv thiab nthuav cov dab neeg. Nco ntsoov tias koj suav nrog cov ntsiab lus tseem ceeb thiab lub sijhawm hauv zaj dab neeg koj xav qhia.
Rau cov dab neeg luv luv, feem ntau yog luv dua qhov zoo dua. Tsis txhob lo rau kab lus uas tsis hais dab tsi lossis qhov xwm txheej uas tsis muaj lub hom phiaj tsuas yog vim koj nyiam nws. Tsis txhob ntshai tso cov dab neeg thaum nws xa tuaj
Kauj Ruam 3. Nrhiav lub npe ntxim nyiam
Feem ntau cov kws kho, thiab nyeem, yuav saib lub npe ntawm zaj dab neeg ua ntej los txiav txim siab seb lawv puas xav nyeem ntxiv. Xaiv lub npe uas yuav ua rau xav paub lossis txaus siab ntawm tus nyeem ntawv thiab txhawb kom lawv nyeem cov dab neeg tseeb. Siv lub ntsiab lus, kev piav qhia, lossis tus cim lub npe ntawm zaj dab neeg ua lub npe.
- Piv txwv li, Alice Munro lub npe "Ib Yam Kuv Tau Ua Lub Neej Qhia Rau Koj" yog tus piv txwv zoo vim nws hais cov cim hauv zaj dab neeg thiab tos txais tus nyeem ncaj qha, thaum "Kuv" xav qhia qee yam rau tus nyeem ntawv.
- Lub npe "Snow, Apple, Glass" los ntawm Neil Gaiman kuj yog tus piv txwv zoo raws li nws piav qhia peb yam khoom uas txaus siab rau lawv tus kheej, tab sis tuaj yeem dhau los ua qhov txaus siab thaum muab tso ua ke hauv zaj dab neeg.
Kauj Ruam 4. Cia lwm tus nyeem thiab thuam koj zaj dab neeg luv luv
Qhia koj cov dab neeg luv luv rau cov phooj ywg, cov neeg hauv tsev neeg, thiab cov npoj yaig hauv tsev kawm ntawv. Nug lawv yog tias koj zaj dab neeg muaj kev xav lossis koom nrog. Qhib rau kev thuam los ntawm lwm tus vim tias nws tuaj yeem ntxiv dag zog rau koj zaj dab neeg.
- Koj tseem tuaj yeem koom nrog pab pawg sau ntawv thiab xa koj zaj dab neeg luv luv rau kev cob qhia. Lossis koj tuaj yeem pib sau cov pab pawg nrog cov phooj ywg yog li koj tuaj yeem ntsuas tus kheej txoj haujlwm.
- Thaum koj tau txais kev tawm tswv yim los ntawm lwm tus neeg, sim rov kho cov dab neeg luv luv kom nws dhau los ua cov ntawv sau tau zoo tshaj plaws.
