Kev sau menyuam cov dab neeg xav tau lub tswv yim muaj zog thiab muaj peev xwm pom tej yam los ntawm tus menyuam qhov kev xav. Tej zaum koj yuav tsum sau me nyuam zaj dab neeg rau chav kawm lossis tus kheej txoj haujlwm. Txhawm rau sau nws, pib los ntawm kev tawm tswv yim ntawm cov ncauj lus uas koj cov menyuam pom nthuav. Tom qab ntawd, sau ib zaj dab neeg nrog qhib zoo, siv cov phiaj xwm muaj zog, thiab suav nrog kev ncaj ncees ntawm zaj dab neeg. Tsis tas li, nco ntsoov koj ua kom zoo dua koj zaj dab neeg tom qab koj tau ua tiav cov ntawv sau kom nws tuaj yeem rov hais dua rau cov neeg nyeem hluas.
Kauj ruam
Ntu 1 ntawm 3: Pib
Kauj Ruam 1. Txheeb xyuas pawg hnub nyoog uas koj cov neeg tuaj saib lub hom phiaj
Cov menyuam yaus zaj dab neeg feem ntau sau rau pawg hnub nyoog tshwj xeeb. Koj puas xav sau dab neeg rau cov menyuam yaus? Los yog cov menyuam yaus? Sim nrhiav seb koj lub hom phiaj yog cov menyuam yaus hnub nyoog 2-4, 4-7, lossis 8-10 xyoo. Kev siv cov lus, lub suab/ib puag ncig, thiab tus yam ntxwv ntawm zaj dab neeg yuav hloov pauv raws li pawg hnub nyoog koj tab tom npaj.
- Piv txwv li, yog tias koj tab tom sau ib zaj dab neeg rau ib pab pawg ntawm 2-4 lossis 4-7 xyoo, koj yuav tsum siv cov lus yooj yim dua thiab kab lus luv luv.
- Yog tias koj tab tom sau ib zaj dab neeg rau pawg neeg hnub nyoog 8-10 xyoo, siv cov lus nyuab nyuab dua thiab kab lus uas ntev dua plaub lossis tsib lo lus.
Kauj Ruam 2. Siv kev nco thaum yau los ua dab neeg
Xav txog kev nco thaum yau uas tau zoo siab, coj txawv txawv, lossis xav tsis thoob. Siv cov kev nco no los ua lub hauv paus rau menyuam cov dab neeg uas koj xav sau.
Piv txwv li, tej zaum koj yuav tsum muaj hnub coj txawv txawv hauv qib 3 tsev kawm ntawv theem pib. Koj tuaj yeem hloov qhov kev paub dhau los ua ib zaj dab neeg lom zem. Koj kuj tseem tuaj yeem mus txawv tebchaws thaum koj tseem hluas thiab tau txais kev paub dhau los/dab neeg los ntawm cov kev mus ntsib uas cov menyuam yuav hlub
Kauj Ruam 3. Xaiv yam khoom qub thiab ua rau nws zoo tshaj plaws
Xaiv cov haujlwm txhua hnub lossis cov xwm txheej thiab ntxiv cov ntsiab lus tshwj xeeb rau cov haujlwm/kev tshwm sim. Ua ib yam khoom zoo heev los ntawm kev koom nrog lub ntsej muag zoo nkauj lossis lub ntsej muag zoo rau nws. Siv koj lub tswv yim los sim saib tej yam los ntawm tus menyuam qhov kev xav.
Piv txwv li, koj tuaj yeem xaiv qee yam xws li mus ntsib kws kho hniav thiab ua kom zoo heev los ntawm kev qhib lub tshuab siv hauv chav xyaum. Koj tseem tuaj yeem siv thawj qhov kev paub ntawm kev mus xyuas hiav txwv raws li lub tswv yim dab neeg thiab ua rau nws zoo heev los ntawm kev qhia cov duab ntawm menyuam yaus tshawb txog dej hiav txwv tob
Kauj Ruam 4. Xaiv lub ntsiab lus lossis lub tswv yim dab neeg
Muaj lub ntsiab lus tseem ceeb hauv zaj dab neeg pab koj kom tau txais lub tswv yim. Tsom rau cov ntsiab lus xws li kev hlub, kev poob, tus kheej, lossis kev phooj ywg los ntawm tus menyuam txoj kev xav. Xav txog tus menyuam txoj kev xav ntawm lub ntsiab lus xaiv, tom qab ntawv tshawb xyuas lub ntsiab lus ntxiv.
Piv txwv li, koj tuaj yeem tshawb xyuas lub ntsiab lus ntawm kev phooj ywg los ntawm kev tsom mus rau kev sib raug zoo ntawm tus ntxhais thiab nws tus vaub kib tsiaj
Kauj Ruam 5. Tsim lub cim tshwj xeeb
Qee zaum, menyuam yaus zaj dab neeg nyob ntawm tus yam ntxwv tshwj xeeb uas menyuam tuaj yeem cuam tshuam nrog lawv tus kheej. Xav txog hom kev ua cim uas tsis tshwm nyob rau hauv menyuam yaus cov dab neeg. Tsim lub cim tshwj xeeb uas siv cov menyuam nyiam lossis tus yam ntxwv zoo uas koj tuaj yeem pom hauv ntiaj teb tiag.
Piv txwv li, koj yuav pom tias tsis muaj ntau tus menyuam yaus zaj dab neeg hais txog tus ntxhais tsaus ntuj nti (lossis los ntawm ib haiv neeg uas tsis yog haiv neeg feem ntau/haiv neeg) ua tus yam ntxwv tseem ceeb ntawm zaj dab neeg. Koj tuaj yeem tsim lub cim tseem ceeb los ua qhov khoob
Kauj Ruam 6. Muab ib lossis ob tus yam ntxwv / tus yam ntxwv uas ua rau pom hauv tus yam ntxwv tseem ceeb
Ua tus yam ntxwv tseem ceeb sawv rau tus nyeem ntawv los ntawm kev muab nws lub cev tshwj xeeb, xws li qee yam plaub hau, hom khaub ncaws, lossis taug kev. Koj tseem tuaj yeem muab tus yam ntxwv tseem ceeb tshwj xeeb rau tus kheej, xws li lub siab zoo, nyiam kev nyuaj siab, thiab ua rau muaj teeb meem.
Piv txwv li, koj tuaj yeem tsim lub cim tseem ceeb uas ib txwm braids nws cov plaub hau thiab xav tsis thoob nrog vaub kib. Lossis, koj tseem tuaj yeem tsim tus yam ntxwv tseem ceeb uas muaj qhov cim ntawm nws txhais tes los ntawm kev poob los ntawm tsob ntoo
Kauj Ruam 7. Tsim zaj dab neeg pib lossis qhib
Ua ib zaj dab neeg hauv rau ntu, pib nrog kev nthuav tawm lossis qhia ib feem. Hauv ntu no, koj qhia txog kev teeb tsa, cov cim tseem ceeb, thiab kev tsis sib haum xeeb. Pib los ntawm kev qhia tus cim lub npe thiab piav qhia txog qhov chaw lossis qhov chaw tshwj xeeb. Tom qab ntawd, koj tuaj yeem piav qhia koj tus yam ntxwv lub siab nyiam lossis lub hom phiaj, nrog rau cov teeb meem lossis teeb meem nws lossis nws yuav tau ntsib.
Piv txwv li, koj tuaj yeem sau ntu qhia ua ntej xws li: Ib zaug dhau ib zaug, muaj ib tug ntxhais hu ua Asri uas xav tau tus tsiaj. Asri pom tus vaub kib nyob hauv lub pas dej ze nws lub tsev
Kauj Ruam 8. Qhia qhov xwm txheej uas ua rau muaj kev xav/teeb meem (pib qhov kev tsis sib haum xeeb)
Qhov xwm txheej no yog xwm txheej lossis kev txiav txim siab uas hloov pauv lossis ua rau tus yam ntxwv tseem ceeb. Qhov xwm txheej no tuaj yeem tshwm sim/los ntawm lwm tus cim. Yog xav tau, xwm txheej kuj tseem tuaj yeem tshwm sim los ntawm cov tsev haujlwm/chaw haujlwm tshwj xeeb (piv txwv li tsev kawm lossis chaw haujlwm), lossis xwm txheej (piv txwv li cua daj cua dub lossis cua daj cua dub).
Piv txwv li, koj tuaj yeem nthuav tawm cov xwm txheej xws li: Ibu Asri tau hais tias nws yuav tsum tsis txhob muaj tsiaj vim nws lub luag haujlwm loj dhau
Kauj Ruam 9. Muab cov theem ua haujlwm nce
Hauv theem no, koj txhim kho koj tus yam ntxwv tseem ceeb thiab tshawb nrhiav nws kev sib raug zoo nrog lwm tus cim hauv zaj dab neeg. Qhia nws lub neej nyob nruab nrab ntawm qhov xwm txheej. Piav seb yuav daws nrog lossis kho qhov xwm txheej.
Piv txwv li, koj tuaj yeem sau: Asri pom tus vaub kib thiab nkaum nws hauv nws lub hnab. Nws coj nws txhua qhov zais cia nws niam tsis paub
Kauj Ruam 10. Qhia txog qhov ua tau zoo tshaj plaws ntawm qhov tsis sib haum lossis qhov nce siab
Lub ncov ntawm kev tsis sib haum lossis qhov siab tshaj yog qhov siab tshaj plaws hauv zaj dab neeg. Nyob rau theem no, tus yam ntxwv tseem ceeb yuav tsum txiav txim siab loj lossis xaiv. Cov theem no feem ntau yog tag nrho ntawm "ua yeeb yam" thiab dhau los ua qhov txaus nyiam tshaj plaws ntawm zaj dab neeg.
Piv txwv li, koj tuaj yeem sau zaj dab neeg txog qhov zoo li: Ibu Asri pom tus vaub kib hauv nws lub hnab thiab hais tias nws khaws tsis tau
Kauj Ruam 11. Sau cov theem ntawm kev txo kev tsis sib haum xeeb
Nyob rau theem no, tus yam ntxwv tseem ceeb ntsib qhov txiaj ntsig ntawm nws qhov kev txiav txim siab. Tej zaum nws yuav tau hloov qee yam lossis txiav txim siab. Tus cwj pwm tseem tuaj yeem koom ua ke nrog lwm tus ua cim nyob rau theem ntawm cov phiaj xwm no.
Piv txwv li, koj tuaj yeem sau: Asri thiab nws niam tau sib ntaus, thiab tus vaub kib tau khiav mus. Tom qab paub tias tus vaub kib tau khiav tawm, Asri thiab nws niam tam sim ntawd nrhiav nws
Kauj Ruam 12. Xaus zaj dab neeg nrog kev daws teeb meem
Cov theem no ua haujlwm kom kaw zaj dab neeg. Kev daws teeb meem ua haujlwm qhia rau tus nyeem ntawv seb tus yam ntxwv tseem ceeb ua tiav lossis tsis ua tiav nws lub hom phiaj. Tej zaum tus yam ntxwv tseem ceeb hauv koj zaj dab neeg tau tswj kom tau txais yam nws xav tau, lossis tau cuam tshuam nws tus kheej (tom qab ua tsis tiav).
Piv txwv li, koj tuaj yeem sau cov lus daws teeb meem xws li: Asri thiab nws niam pom tus vaub kib hauv pas dej. Tom qab ntawd lawv pom tus vaub kib ua luam dej tawm mus
Kauj Ruam 13. Nyeem piv txwv me nyuam yaus zaj dab neeg
Tau txais cov duab kom meej dua ntawm hom ntawv no los ntawm kev nyeem piv txwv ntawm kev ua tiav/muaj npe menyuam yaus cov dab neeg. Sim nyeem cov dab neeg uas tsom mus rau cov pej xeem lossis pawg hnub nyoog ntawm cov menyuam uas koj tab tom tsom mus. Koj tuaj yeem nyeem cov dab neeg zoo li:
- Dos thiab qej
- Zaj Dab Neeg Series los ntawm Carrot Garden los ntawm Neil Connelly
- Timun Mas thiab Green Giant
- Zaj dab neeg ntawm nas mos lwj thiab khej
Ntu 2 ntawm 3: Sau Draft Story
Kauj Ruam 1. Tsim kom muaj qhov nthuav/nthuav qhia
Pib nrog ib kab lus uas tuaj yeem rub tus nyeem ntawv tam sim ntawd. Siv cov lus piav qhia tshwj xeeb ntawm tus cwj pwm tseem ceeb raws li kev qhib. Qhia qhov kev ua uas tus ua cim tau ua. Qhov qhib ntu yuav tsum teeb tsa lub siab rau zaj dab neeg thiab tso cai rau tus nyeem ntawv twv tau ntawm zaj dab neeg.
- Piv txwv li, koj tuaj yeem saib qhov qhib ntawm zaj dab neeg "Tus Me Me thiab Khej Me": "Muaj ib zaug, tus mos lwj ntse tau zaum thiab so hauv qab tsob ntoo. Nws nyiam qhov chaw txias thiab lush hav zoov. Mam li nco dheev, nws lub plab pib yws …"
- Tshooj lus qhib no qhia txog qhov xwm txheej, huab cua, thiab cov cim tshwj xeeb ntawm tus "mos lwj" tus cwj pwm.
Kauj Ruam 2. Siv lus hais txog kev nkag siab thiab qhia ntau yam
Coj tus yam ntxwv tseem ceeb rau lub neej los ntawm kev tsom mus rau qhov nws pom, hnov tsw, kov, hnov thiab hnov. Kuj tseem siv cov lus uas qhia txog cov kev paub dhau los ua kom cov neeg nyeem txaus siab rau koj li dab neeg.
- Piv txwv li, koj tuaj yeem piav qhia qhov teeb tsa ntawm zaj dab neeg li "nyob ntsiag to thiab txias" lossis "kub thiab hmoov av".
- Koj tseem tuaj yeem siv cov lus lossis suab cuam tshuam xws li "tawg", "tawg", lossis "whoosh" kom cov neeg nyeem lom zem nrog koj zaj dab neeg.
Kauj Ruam 3. Ntxiv cov lus sib dhos rau zaj dab neeg
Tau txais tus nyeem ntawv mloog los ntawm kev sau cov lus sib dhos rau hauv zaj dab neeg. Sim ua ob kab lus uas sib dhos, nrog cov lus sib dhos tom kawg ntawm txhua kab lus. Koj tseem tuaj yeem sib dhos nrog tib kab lus, xws li, "Nws pom pob zeb diamond" lossis "Tus ntxhais pom cov hnub qub nyob saum ntuj hmo ntuj."
- Koj tuaj yeem siv cov lus sib dhos zoo meej. Hauv qhov no, ob lo lus uas sib dhos muaj cov tsiaj ntawv sib txuam thiab cov ntawv sib txuas. Piv txwv li, lo lus "hlub" thiab "tu siab" tuaj yeem ua cov lus sib dhos zoo meej.
- Koj tseem tuaj yeem siv cov lus sib dhos tsis zoo. Hauv qhov no, tsuas yog vowels lossis consonants sib haum. Piv txwv li, cov lus "ntiaj teb" thiab "sunyi" tuaj yeem ua suab tsis sib xws vim tias tsuas yog lub suab vowel "i" yog qhov tsim nyog.
Kauj Ruam 4. Siv reps lossis rov ua dua
Nqa cov lus hauv zaj dab neeg los ntawm kev rov ua cov lus tseem ceeb lossis kab lus thoob plaws hauv zaj dab neeg. Kev rov ua dua pab cov nyeem kom txaus siab thiab nco qab zaj dab neeg uas tau sau.
Piv txwv li, koj tuaj yeem rov nug cov lus nug xws li "Lub pussy nyob qhov twg?" thoob plaws zaj dab neeg. Koj tseem tuaj yeem rov ua cov kab lus zoo li "Gosh!" lossis "Nws yog qhov kawg ntawm no!" los tuav lub ntsiab lus lossis "lub zog" ntawm zaj dab neeg
Kauj Ruam 5. Suav nrog cov lus sib piv, piv txwv, thiab ua piv txwv
Cov lus hais txog kev hais lus hais txog kev siv tib tus ntawv sib txuas hauv txhua lo lus, xws li hauv kab lus "Kumba the grubby cat" lossis "Denting strings of the Goddess". Kev suav sau tuaj yeem yog lub hauv paus tseem ceeb los ntxiv cov lus sib dhos rau kev sau thiab ua dab neeg nthuav rau menyuam yaus.
- Metaphor hais txog kev sib piv ntawm ob yam. Piv txwv li, koj tuaj yeem suav nrog cov lus piv txwv xws li "Cov hnub qub yog lub qhov muag ntawm tus vaj tswv uas ci rau saum ntuj."
- Simile hais txog kev sib piv ntawm ob yam uas siv ua ke "nyiam" lossis "nyiam". Piv txwv li, koj yuav suav qhov zoo ib yam li "Nws zoo li noog hauv lub tawb kub."
Kauj Ruam 6. Ua tus yam ntxwv tseem ceeb ntsib teeb meem
Ib qho tseem ceeb hauv zaj dab neeg zoo yog kev tsis sib haum xeeb. Nyob rau theem no, tus yam ntxwv tseem ceeb yuav tsum kov yeej cov teeb meem lossis teeb meem txhawm rau ua tiav hauv kev tau txais qee yam. Qhia tsuas yog ib qho kev tsis sib haum uas pom tseeb thiab meej rau tus nyeem ntawv hauv koj zaj dab neeg. Tus cwj pwm tseem ceeb hauv zaj dab neeg yuav tsum ntsib teeb meem ntawm kev lees paub los ntawm lwm tus, teeb meem hauv tsev neeg, lossis teeb meem nrog nws kev txhim kho lub cev.
- Lwm qhov kev tsis sib haum xeeb tshwj xeeb hauv menyuam cov dab neeg yog kev ntshai ntawm qhov tsis paub, xws li kawm paub txuj ci tshiab, mus xyuas qhov chaw tshiab, lossis ploj mus.
- Piv txwv li, koj tuaj yeem qhia tus yam ntxwv tseem ceeb uas nyuaj rau nws nrog nws cov phooj ywg hauv tsev kawm ntawv yog li nws ua tus vaub kib ua nws tus phooj ywg zoo tshaj. Koj tseem tuaj yeem qhia tus yam ntxwv tseem ceeb uas ntshai hauv qab daus lossis nthab hauv nws lub tsev thiab kawm tawm tsam qhov kev ntshai ntawd.
Kauj Ruam 7. Qhia txog kev coj ncaj ncees ntawm zaj dab neeg hauv kev koom nrog thiab txhawb siab, yam tsis yog "qhia"
Cov menyuam yaus feem ntau cov dab neeg muaj qhov xaus zoo siab thiab txhawb siab nrog kev coj ncaj ncees dab neeg. Tsis txhob ua dab neeg ncaj ncees uas xav tias hnyav heev rau menyuam. Kev coj ncaj ncees uas tau qhia hauv kev dhau los tau txiav txim siab zoo dua thiab tsawg dua "qhia meej" rau cov nyeem.
Sim qhia kev ncaj ncees ntawm zaj dab neeg los ntawm kev ua ntawm cov cim. Piv txwv li, koj tuaj yeem qhia tus cwj pwm Asri thiab nws niam puag ntawm ntug dej thaum tus vaub kib hla mus. Qhov kev nqis tes no tuaj yeem cuam tshuam kev ncaj ncees ntawm zaj dab neeg los ntawm kev nrhiav kev txhawb siab los ntawm tsev neeg, yam tsis qhia tus nyeem ntawv meej meej txog kev ncaj ncees ntawm zaj dab neeg nws tus kheej
Kauj Ruam 8. Qhia koj zaj dab neeg
Cov menyuam yaus phau ntawv dab neeg feem ntau yog nruab nrog cov duab piav qhia kom coj dab neeg los rau lub neej pom kev. Koj tuaj yeem sim ua koj tus kheej cov lus piav qhia dab neeg lossis ntiav cov kev pabcuam ntawm tus kws kos duab.
- Hauv ntau tus menyuam phau ntawv dab neeg, cov duab uas tau nthuav tawm muaj ib nrab lub luag haujlwm tseem ceeb hauv kev xa zaj dab neeg rau tus nyeem ntawv. Koj tuaj yeem nthuav qhia tus yam ntxwv xws li khaub ncaws, khaub ncaws, ntsej muag ntsej muag, thiab xim hauv zaj dab neeg.
- Feem ntau, cov lus piav qhia rau menyuam cov phau ntawv yog ua tom qab sau zaj dab neeg. Txoj kev no, tus neeg piav qhia tuaj yeem kos raws cov ntsiab lus hauv txhua qhov xwm txheej lossis kab lus dab neeg.
Ntu 3 ntawm 3: Txhim Kho Zaj Dab Neeg
Kauj Ruam 1. Nyeem zaj dab neeg nrov
Thaum koj tau ua tiav kev sau koj cov ntawv, nyeem nws nrov nrov rau koj tus kheej. Mloog lub suab lossis zaj dab neeg. Ua tib zoo saib seb puas siv cov lus nyuaj dhau lossis siab rau cov pab pawg hnub nyoog. Kho cov dab neeg kom yooj yim rau cov menyuam nyeem thiab ua raws.
Kauj Ruam 2. Qhia zaj dab neeg sau rau cov menyuam
Tau txais cov lus tawm tswv yim los ntawm koj lub hom phiaj cov neeg tuaj saib hnub nyoog. Nug koj cov nus muag, cov neeg hauv tsev neeg, lossis menyuam yaus ntawm koj lub tsev kawm ntawv kom nyeem zaj dab neeg uas koj tau sau thiab muab tswv yim. Kho zaj dab neeg nrog cov lus teb muab rau kom zaj dab neeg nthuav dua thiab nkag siab yooj yim/koom nrog cov menyuam.
Kauj Ruam 3. Rov kho qhov ntev thiab meej ntawm zaj dab neeg
Nyeem tsab ntawv ua tib zoo rov ua dua thiab xyuas kom zaj dab neeg tsis ntev heev. Feem ntau, cov menyuam yaus cov dab neeg zoo tshaj plaws yog luv thiab ncaj. Feem ntau cov menyuam yaus zaj dab neeg suav nrog cov ntawv luv luv. Txawm hais tias luv luv, cov ntawv hauv zaj dab neeg tau siv zoo los qhia zaj dab neeg.
Kauj Ruam 4. Sim luam tawm zaj dab neeg uas koj tau sau
Yog tias koj nyiam zaj dab neeg sau, koj tuaj yeem xa nws mus rau tus menyuam phau ntawv tshaj tawm. Sau tus menyuam cov dab neeg xa tsab ntawv uas koj tau sau thiab xa mus rau tus kws kho lossis tus tshaj tawm.
