Kev siv tus kheej cov lus yog ib qho ntawm qhov kev txwv uas yuav tsum zam los ntawm txhua tus neeg sau ntawm cov ntawv tshawb fawb. Hmoov tsis zoo, nrhiav kev hloov pauv rau nqe lus zoo li, "Kuv xav" lossis "Kuv tawm tsam" tsis yooj yim li tig lub xib teg, tshwj xeeb tshaj yog nyob rau hauv cov ntsiab lus ntawm kab lus sib cav. Yog tias koj nquag ntsib cov teeb meem zoo ib yam, sim nyeem kab ntawv no txhawm rau nrhiav ntau yam lus qhia rau kev nthuav tawm kev sib cav yam tsis siv tus kheej lub npe. Ib qho ntxiv, tsab xov xwm no tseem qhia ntau yam lus qhia kom tsis txhob siv cov lus slang thiab cov lus tsis raug uas cov kws sau ntawv feem ntau tsis tau paub dua! Tom qab nyeem kab ntawv no, rov tshuaj xyuas koj qhov kev sau thiab hloov cov lus uas zoo ib yam thiab tus yam ntxwv nrog cov lus hom phiaj ntau dua. Nrog kev xyaum me ntsis, muaj tseeb ntau txoj cai ntsig txog kev sau ntawv yuav raug kaw hauv koj lub siab!
Kauj ruam
Txoj Kev 1 ntawm 3: Ua Raws Li Txoj Cai Dav Dav
Kauj Ruam 1. Siv tus neeg thib peb pom
Tsis txhob siv thawj cov lus hais xws li "Kuv", "kuv li", lossis cov lus zoo sib xws hauv cov ntawv tshawb fawb sau rau lub hom phiaj kev kawm. Tsis tas li, zam kev siv tus neeg thib ob qhov kev xav, xws li hu rau tus nyeem ntawv "koj". Hloov chaw, sau cov ncauj lus uas yuav raug coj los ntawm tus neeg thib peb qhov kev pom los txhawb lub hom phiaj.
Piv txwv, hloov kab lus, "Kuv xav tias pluas tshais yog qhov tseem ceeb tshaj plaws ntawm kev txhawb nqa koj cov haujlwm txhua hnub," nrog, "Kev noj tshais zoo yog qhov tseem ceeb tshaj plaws ntawm kev noj zaub mov zoo."
Kauj Ruam 2. Siv lub hom phiaj xaiv lo lus es tsis siv cov lus piav qhia
Qee qhov piv txwv ntawm kev hais tawm tsis raug yog cov lus hais lus sib txawv, kev hais lus sib tham, clichés, thiab kev cog lus (luv luv, feem ntau tshwm hauv kab lus Askiv). Txhua tus ntawm lawv yog cov lus tsis raug uas feem ntau pom hauv kev sau tus kheej lossis cov ntawv tsis raug, tab sis tsis tsim nyog muab suav nrog hauv kev sau txuj tshawb fawb.
- Cov lus Slang thiab cov kab lus sib tham yog kab lus uas ib txwm nyiam nyob hauv qee pab pawg neeg lossis kev ntseeg, xws li "baper," "ntxhov siab," lossis "yooj yim sotoy!" Es tsis txhob sau ntawv, "Nws npau taws vim nws cov txheej txheem kev lag luam tsis ua haujlwm," sim sau ntawv, "Nws poob siab tias nws cov txuj ci kev lag luam tsis ua haujlwm."
- Cliche yog qhov qhia uas suav tias tsis muaj qab hau lossis txaus siab vim nws tau hais ntau zaus. Qee qhov no suav nrog, "cia sijhawm teb," lossis "noob ntawm qhov zoo tshaj plaws," uas tuaj yeem hloov pauv rau kab lus xws li, "cov txiaj ntsig tseem tsis tau pom dua," thiab "zoo tshaj plaws."
- Yog tias daim ntawv sau ua lus Askiv, zam kev siv cov ntawv cog lus lossis luv kab lus xws li, "tsis txhob," "yuav tsis," "tsis tau," thiab "nws yog." Hloov chaw, sau cov kab lus uas siv tag nrho version.
Kauj Ruam 3. Ua kom tau raws li qhov xav tau
Hauv kev sib piv rau tus kheej cov lus uas zoo li tsis meej pem, cov lus tsim nyog yuav tsum muaj suab meej, ncaj, thiab meej. Piv txwv li, kab lus zoo li, "Lawv qhov kev ua tau zoo tshaj qhov xav tau," yuav muaj zog dua li, "Lawv ua tau zoo heev." Tsis tas li, tsis txhob sau ntawv, "Qhov nyuaj nce zuj zus," sim sau, "Qhov nyuaj zuj zus zuj zus."
Tsis tas li, zam kev kwv yees xws li, "ntau yam kev tshawb fawb," "ntau lub sijhawm," lossis "txheej kev kawm." Hloov chaw, siv tus lej tshwj xeeb los piav qhia tus lej xws li, "Pab pawg tshawb fawb tau siv 17 hnub los khaws cov qauv."
Kauj Ruam 4. Siv sijhawm los xav txog cov lus muaj zog thiab lus qhia
Sim nrhiav qhov muaj zog, tshwj xeeb cov lus qhia es tsis txhob siv cov kab lus ntau dhau nrog cov lus piav qhia. Hais txog kev sau cov npe, xyuas kom cov lus piav qhia suav nrog yog qhov tseeb thiab tsis cuam tshuam nrog kev xav ntawm tus kheej. Yog tias koj muaj teeb meem nrhiav txoj cai xaiv lo lus, thov txheeb xyuas thesaurus lossis internet nplooj ntawv txhawm rau nrhiav cov lus piav qhia uas zoo tshaj plaws rau koj lub ntsiab lus.
- Piv txwv li, kab lus "Tus kws tshaj lij cov lus pov thawj tau tawm tsam tus kws lij choj qhov kev sib cav" suab muaj zog ntau dua li "Tus pov thawj tau muab pov thawj txaus ntseeg heev thiab tuaj yeem ua rau tus neeg raug liam tias ua txhaum ntau."
- Yog tias daim ntawv sau ua lus Askiv, hloov "ua" cov lus qhia xws li yog, yog, yog, yog, yog, thiab yuav nrog cov lus qhia muaj zog. Piv txwv li, tsis txhob sau ntawv, "Kev tiv thaiv qhov kev sib cav tsis raug vim nws tau ua los ntawm kev kwv yees," sim sau, "Qhov kev tiv thaiv kev sib cav ua tsis tau vim nws vam khom cov pov thawj xav txog qhov pov thawj).
Txoj Kev 2 ntawm 3: Nrhiav Tus Kheej Tus Kheej Hloov Chaw
Kauj Ruam 1. Qhia qhov kev thov kom meej thiab meej, tsis txhob siv cov kab lus tus kheej xws li, "Kuv xav
Qee zaum, tsuas yog ib yam uas yuav tsum tau ua yog tshem cov kab lus zoo li "Kuv xav" lossis "Kuv ntseeg" uas feem ntau pom thaum pib kab lus. Kev tshem tawm tus kheej lub npe yuav ua rau koj cov lus sib cav lossis thov lub suab ntau lub hom phiaj thiab ntseeg tau.
- Sib piv ob kab lus hauv qab no: "Kuv xav tias nws yog kev lag luam kev sib raug zoo ntawm cov tebchaws uas tiv thaiv kev ua tsov ua rog," thiab "Kev sib raug zoo ntawm kev lag luam ntawm cov tebchaws tiv thaiv kev ua tsov ua rog." Kab lus thib ob ua tau zoo dua lub hom phiaj thiab muaj cai.
- Koj tuaj yeem xav tias xav kom lees paub qhov kev thov los ntawm suav nrog tus kheej lub npe, tshwj xeeb tshaj yog tias koj tsis paub tseeb txog qhov tseeb ntawm qhov kev thov. Tsis txhob ua! Hloov chaw, ntxiv dag zog rau koj qhov kev tshawb fawb vim tias ua tiav cov ntaub ntawv koj muaj ntawm qhov kev tshawb fawb, qhov yooj yim dua nws yuav ua kom muaj zog, tsim kom tau thov.
- Txawm hais tias qhov kev tawm tsam ua rau muaj kev sib cav muaj zog heev, khaws koj lub suab tso cai. Txawm hais tias koj yuav tsum lees paub qhov kev tawm tsam qhov kev tawm tsam, tseem zam kev siv tus kheej lub npe uas tuaj yeem ua rau koj qhov kev sib cav tsis muaj zog.
Kauj Ruam 2. Xa mus rau cov pov thawj pov thawj, tsis yog rau koj tus kheej txoj kev xav
Yog tias lawv xav ua pov thawj qhov kev thov, qee tus neeg muaj lub siab nyiam sau, "Kuv ntseeg," "Kuv paub tias nws muaj tseeb," lossis "Kuv tsis pom zoo kiag li." Hmoov tsis zoo, kab lus uas hais txog tus txheej txheem kev xav ntawm tus kheej tsis muaj lub hom phiaj, thiab tsis yog lawv yuav ntxiv dag zog rau tus sau phau ntawv sib cav. Tias yog vim li cas, koj yuav tsum xa mus rau cov ntaub ntawv pov thawj pom zoo kom cov lus pom zoo muab lub suab ntseeg tau ntau dua.
Piv txwv li, kab lus uas nyeem, "Kuv tsis pom zoo nrog tus kws lij choj txoj kev sim ua kom lub tsheb puas tsuaj ua rau muaj xwm txheej," tuaj yeem ua rau muaj kev ntseeg siab ntxiv los ntawm kev hloov nws mus, "Raws li cov kws tshaj lij cov lus pov thawj los ntawm cov chaw tsim khoom, tus kws lij choj thov txog tsheb kev puas tsuaj vim qhov ua rau muaj xwm txheej tsis muaj tseeb thiab muaj tseeb."
Kauj Ruam 3. Qhia koj qhov kev sib cav lossis kev tshawb fawb yam tsis siv tus kheej lub npe
Txawm hais tias kab lus uas pib nrog, "Kuv yuav qhia," "Kuv yuav piav qhia," lossis "Kuv yuav sib cav txog," suab ntau dua ntuj, qhov kev hais tawm tiag tiag uas cuam tshuam nrog tus kheej cov lus yuav tsum tsis suav nrog hauv cov ntawv tshawb fawb. Yog li ntawd, thov hloov kho qhov tsim nyog me me yog tias koj tsis tuaj yeem tshem tawm tus kheej siv tam sim ntawd.
- Piv txwv li, tsis txhob tshem tawm tag nrho kab lus uas hais tias, "Kuv xav tias nws yog kev hloov pauv kev lag luam uas ua rau kev lag luam poob," tsuas yog tshem cov kab lus "Kuv xav."
- Ua tus txheej txheem piav qhia, yog tias tsim nyog. Piv txwv li, kab lus uas nyeem hais tias, "Kuv yuav tshuaj xyuas cov tsiaj ntawv thiab ntawv sau los qhia qhov cuam tshuam Charles Baudelaire lub neej hauv Paris tau xav txog nws qhov kev xav txog niaj hnub no," tuaj yeem piav qhia, "Kev txheeb xyuas cov ntawv thiab cov ntawv sau nkag yuav qhia tau tias …. " Vim li ntawd, kab lus "Kuv yuav" tsis tas yuav siv ntxiv lawm.
Kauj Ruam 4. Siv lub suab tsis zoo los hais qhia qhov ua yam tsis hais lub npe
Yeej, lub suab passive yuav raug siv hauv qhov tsim nyog los nthuav tawm kev sib cav lossis piav qhia qee yam txheej txheem. Piv txwv, tsis txhob sau ntawv, "Kuv yuav ua pov thawj," sim sau, "Nws yuav pom tseeb qhov ntawd." Hauv cov ntawv tshawb fawb, kab lus "Cov qauv no tau dhau los ntawm cov txheej txheem sim" zoo dua li "Kuv tau sim cov qauv no."
- Hauv lub suab passive, cov ntsiab lus ntawm kab lus yog kev ua lossis kev ua los ntawm ib tus neeg. Tias yog vim li cas, kab lus passive zoo li muaj cov lus thiab tsis muaj txiaj ntsig. Ntawm qhov tod tes, lub suab nquag yuav ua suab nrov dua thiab tuaj yeem tsom mus rau tus ua ntawm qhov ua, ntau dua ntawm lawv qhov kev nqis tes ua: "Kawm A tau ua qhov no."
- Sau hauv lub suab nquag thaum twg los tau. Piv txwv li, sim sau ntawv, "Charles Baudelaire piav qhia txog kev niaj hnub" tsis yog "Kev niaj hnub piav los ntawm Charles Baudelaire."
Kauj Ruam 5. Siv cov kev coj ua dav dav es tsis txhob siv lub npe "koj
Thaum koj tab tom nthuav dav hauv kev sib tham, hais qee yam xws li, "Yog tias koj ua txhaum txoj cai, koj yuav ntsib teeb meem," yog yam uas yuav tsum ua. Zoo, hauv tus txheej txheem ntawm kev sau cov ntaub ntawv tshawb fawb, koj tsuas yog xav hloov lub npe "koj" nrog "cov neeg mloog," "tus nyeem ntawv," lossis "cov neeg tuaj saib," kom tsis txhob siv cov lus uas tus kheej dhau lawm.
- Es tsis txhob sau ib yam dab tsi zoo li, "Kev ntxhib los mos thiab xim hauv daim duab yuav ua rau koj lub qhov muag puas tsuaj," sim sau, "Kev ntxhib los mos thiab xim hauv daim duab tau thov los ntawm cov nyeem kom ntau dhau."
- Yog tias koj xav tau, koj kuj tseem tuaj yeem hloov cov lus dav dav nrog cov lus xaiv ntau ntom thiab muaj txiaj ntsig. Piv txwv li, hloov kab lus zoo li, "Koj tuaj yeem pom ntawm koj tus kheej tias qhov kev thov tsis raug," nrog, "Cov lus thov tsis raug," lossis piav nws li, "Txhua qhov pov thawj muaj tawm tsam qhov kev thov."
- Siv cov txheej txheem dav dav hauv ib feem tsim nyog. Siv cov kab lus zoo li, "tus nyeem ntawv tuaj yeem pom" lossis "tus nyeem ntawv yuav xav" ntau dhau yuav ua rau koj cov ntawv sau txawv.
Txoj Kev 3 ntawm 3: Zam Kev Tshaj Tawm Tsis Txaus
Kauj Ruam 1. Siv cov lus uas tsim nyog thiab qhov tseeb hloov ntawm kev xav
Qhov tseeb, daim ntawv zoo yuav tsum tau sau nrog cov lus tshwj xeeb, lub hom phiaj, thiab pov thawj-raws lo lus xaiv. Cov kab lus hais txog tus kheej tuaj yeem ua kom raug grammatically, tab sis yog tias lawv tsis suav nrog cov pov thawj, lawv tsuas tuaj yeem txiav txim siab raws li kev xav ntau dua li qhov tseeb.
- Piv txwv li, kab lus xws li, "Kev ua tau zoo ntawm kev tshuaj xyuas pom tias cov txheej txheem kev nrhiav neeg ua haujlwm luv tau tuaj yeem ua rau muaj kev txaus siab ntau ntxiv ntawm cov neeg thov kev ua haujlwm," raws li qhov tseeb thiab qhov tseeb qhov tseeb, thaum kab lus xws li, "Cov txheej txheem nrhiav neeg ua haujlwm ntawm no yog qhov phem heev thiab tsis meej pem, "tsis muaj lub hauv paus uas ntseeg tau. meej thiab qhov tseeb yog li nws yuav tsuas yog txiav txim siab raws li kev xav, es tsis yog lub hom phiaj tseeb.
- Yog tias koj lub hom phiaj yog xav rov hais dua rau tus nyeem ntawv txoj kev xav, xav siv ntau txoj kev xav hauv lub siab yam tsis tas yuav suav nrog tus kheej cov lus hais.
Kauj Ruam 2. Hloov cov lus slang nrog cov lus tshwj xeeb thiab kab lus
Qee zaum, cov lus slang yuav tawm los tsis pom. Yog li ntawd, tsis txhob hnov qab tshuaj xyuas koj cov ntawv kom tsis txhob siv lo lus slang! Xav tias koj tsis yog tus neeg hais lus ntawm hom lus siv hauv kev ua haujlwm tshawb fawb. Yog tias koj siv lus Indonesian, sim nrhiav cov lus lossis kab lus uas tsis zoo rau koj lub pob ntseg yog tias Indonesian tsis yog koj hom lus.
Piv txwv, zam cov kab lus uas muaj cov lus slang xws li, "Tus txiv neej tau txais tsab ntawv ceeb toom thib peb rau nws tus cwj pwm ua txuj ci tseem ceeb." Hloov chaw, siv qhov kev hais tshwj xeeb thiab lub ntsiab lus xws li, "Vim nws tus cwj pwm tsis tsim nyog, tus neeg ua haujlwm tom qab sau npe nyiaj ntsuab tau raug cem los ntawm nws tus thawj coj."
Kauj Ruam 3. Nco ntsoov tias tsis muaj kev sib tham hauv koj qhov kev sau
Kev siv cov kab lus niaj hnub thiab cov lus piv txwv yog qhov nyuaj dua kom zam dhau cov lus slang! Thaum koj sau ntawv yuav tsum muaj dej ntau li sai tau, xyuas kom tsis muaj kev sib tham hauv nws. Ua koj qhov zoo tshaj plaws kom tsis txhob siv daim duab ntawm kev hais lus thiab ua raws cov lus xaiv raug.
Qee qhov piv txwv ntawm kab lus uas nquag siv hauv cov lus niaj hnub yog "hais yooj yim dua li ua tiav," "sai dua lossis tom qab," thiab "sib ntsib hauv nruab nrab." Lub caij no, qee qhov piv txwv piv txwv uas tuaj yeem siv los hloov cov kab lus no yog "xyaum ua nyuaj dua," "zam tsis tau," thiab "cuam tshuam."
Kauj Ruam 4. Tsis txhob siv cov kab lus luv luv, yooj yim, lossis tsis tiav
Tsis yog tias koj yuav tsum sau cov kab lus uas ntev dhau thiab sib zog, yog! Kev siv kab lus uas ntev dhau tuaj yeem txhim kho kev nyeem tau, tsuav yog lawv tau muab tso rau qhov raug, thiab tsis rov ua dhau. Yog tias koj siv ntau kab lus yooj yooj yim lossis luv dhau, nws ntshai tsam koj qhov kev sau ntawv yuav tawv thiab tsis ntws.
- Tsis tas li, nco ntsoov tias koj ib txwm siv ua tiav, tsis hais cov kab lus. Piv txwv li, kab lus zoo li, “Cov neeg ua yeeb yam tau ua tiav qhov ua tau zoo. Tag nrho cov neeg mloog tau quaj, "Qhov tseeb, nws muaj cov qauv sau ntawv tsis raug thiab tsis tsim nyog suav nrog hauv kev sau ntawv tshawb fawb.
- Ntawm qhov tod tes, yog dab tsi sau yog rov pib dua, kab lus luv thiab tsis tiav yog qhov zoo dua. Piv txwv li, tsis txhob sau ntawv, "Kuv tswj hwm kom kuv cov peev nyiaj qis dua 10%," sau yooj yim, "Ib qho nyiaj 10% nyem."
