Koj puas yog tus kws sau ntawv hluas uas xav nthuav nws lub tis hauv qhov ntawv tseeb? Txhawm rau ua koj cov haujlwm zoo ib yam thiab txawv ntawm cov ntawv dab neeg luam tawm, vim li cas ho tsis muab cov duab tshiab los sim? Hloov chaw yooj yim ntim cov dab neeg hauv daim ntawv ntawm cov lus piav qhia, cov neeg sau cov duab tshiab tseem siv cov duab pom los ua kom zaj dab neeg zoo li muaj txoj sia nyob. Xav paub txoj hauv kev yooj yim los ua cov duab nraaj zoo? Nyeem rau kab lus no!
Kauj ruam
Ntu 1 ntawm 3: Sib Sau Cov Tswv Yim
Kauj Ruam 1. Tsim cov phiaj xwm phiaj xwm
Cov duab nraaj zoo yuav tsum muaj zaj dab neeg muaj zog thiab nthuav. Txog qhov ntawd, koj yuav tsum xub tsim cov phiaj xwm phiaj xwm uas feem ntau muaj tsib lub ntsiab lus tseem ceeb:
- Kev nthuav tawm: Hauv theem no, koj pib sau luv luv ntawm qhov teeb tsa, cov cim tseem ceeb, thiab kev tsis sib haum ntawm zaj dab neeg. Piv txwv li, koj qhov kev nthuav tawm tshiab yog cov neeg txawv tebchaws hluas uas nyob hauv lub nroog me thiab poob rau kev hlub nrog poj niam los ntawm tib neeg haiv neeg.
- Cov lus taw qhia: Lub sijhawm no muaj lub sijhawm lossis sijhawm uas hloov pauv tus yam ntxwv tseem ceeb hauv lub neej. Piv txwv li, ntawm qhov hloov pauv hauv koj phau ntawv tshiab, tus poj niam ua txhaum nrog nws tus qub hluas nraug thiab pib nrhiav tus khub tshiab rau tsev kawm seev cev.
- Preclimax: Nyob rau theem no, koj pib txhim kho tus yam ntxwv tseem ceeb thiab nws kev sib raug zoo nrog cov neeg nyob ib puag ncig nws. Piv txwv li, ntawm qhov ua ntej qhov kawg ntawm koj phau ntawv tshiab, tus neeg txawv tebchaws pib siv sijhawm ntau nrog tus ntxhais kawm cov ntaub ntawv xeem.
- Climax: Climax yog qhov tseem ceeb tshaj plaws ntawm zaj dab neeg. Nyob rau theem no, tus yam ntxwv tseem ceeb yuav tsum txiav txim siab tseem ceeb tshaj plaws lossis xaiv hauv nws lub neej. Piv txwv li, ntawm qhov kawg ntawm koj qhov tshiab, tus yam ntxwv txawv txawv txiav txim siab thov tus ntxhais los ua nws tus khub ntawm tsev kawm seev cev. Tus poj niam lees txais qhov kev caw thiab cov neeg txawv teb chaws yuav tsum xav txog yuav ua dab tsi ntawm lawv thawj "hnub".
- Post-climax: Hauv theem no, tus yam ntxwv tseem ceeb tau ntsib nrog qhov txiaj ntsig ntawm nws qhov kev txiav txim siab; qhov no yog vim li cas feem ntau, theem no yog tag nrho ntawm kev nqis tes ua thiab tsis txaus ntseeg. Piv txwv li, tom qab qhov kawg ntawm koj qhov tshiab, cov neeg txawv teb chaws thiab cov ntxhais tau seev cev ua ke tab sis cov neeg nyob ib puag ncig lawv zoo li tsis txaus ntseeg rau qhov kev muaj tiag. Ib qho ntxiv, tus neeg txawv teb chaws tseem yuav tsum cuam tshuam nrog cov mafia uas tau sim ua kom caum lawv ob qho tib si thaum ua las voos tog.
- Kev daws teeb meem: Nyob rau theem no, tus nyeem ntawv yuav tsum paub qhov kawg ntawm tus cwj pwm txoj kev taug thiab seb tus ua cim tau ua tiav nws lub hom phiaj lossis tsis. Piv txwv li, hauv kev daws teeb meem ntawm koj cov ntawv tshiab, tus poj niam ua cim pab cov neeg txawv teb chaws thiab ob leeg ua ke tawm ntawm Lub Ntiaj Teb nrog kev pab los ntawm UFO.
Kauj Ruam 2. Ua kom pom lub cim tseem ceeb tshwj xeeb, nthuav, thiab nco tau
Muab koj tus yam ntxwv tseem ceeb tshwj xeeb rau tus kheej thiab tus yam ntxwv. Hauv lwm lo lus, zam cov cim uas tus neeg nyeem paub dhau.
- Piv txwv li, cia peb hais tias koj tus xeeb ceem tau yug los nrog lub peev xwm loj tab sis muaj lub sijhawm nyuaj zais lawv los ntawm cov uas nyob ze nws. Koj tseem tuaj yeem tsim cov cim nyob rau hauv daim ntawv ntawm cov neeg txawv teb chaws uas tab tom sim ua kom yeej tib neeg lub siab.
- Koj tseem tuaj yeem tsom mus rau ib pab pawg ntawm cov cim kom nthuav dav ntawm koj qhov tshiab (piv txwv li, koj lub cim tseem ceeb yog pab pawg phooj ywg lossis tsev neeg coob).
Kauj Ruam 3. Tsis txhob ntshai tshawb qhov chaw ntawm zaj dab neeg
Xaiv keeb kwm yav dhau los uas nthuav tawm qhov tob ntawm qhov tshiab thiab zoo li pom kev txaus nyiam. Yog tias koj xav tau, sim xaiv qhov keeb kwm yav dhau tsis meej me ntsis kom cov toj roob hauv pes zoo li txawv thiab nthuav hauv qhov muag ntawm tus nyeem ntawv. Koj kuj tseem tuaj yeem xaiv qhov chaw uas koj paub, thiab tom qab ntawd hloov nws kom ua rau nws zoo nkauj dua (piv txwv li, los ntawm kev hloov nws txoj haujlwm).
Piv txwv li, koj tuaj yeem xaiv cov dab neeg teeb tsa uas zoo ib yam li Lub Ntiaj Teb tab sis yog neeg txawv teb chaws nyob tsis yog neeg. Koj tseem tuaj yeem xaiv qhov chaw paub zoo ib yam li koj lub nroog, tab sis ntxiv qee qhov txawv thiab tsis muaj qhov xav kom ua rau nws txawv
Kauj Ruam 4. Xaiv yam kev kos duab tshwj xeeb
Ua kom koj cov ntawv tshiab zoo nkauj tshwj xeeb hauv qhov muag ntawm tus nyeem ntawv los ntawm kev xaiv cov duab kos uas koj nyiam thiab ua tau zoo. Yog tias koj tau txais kev tshoov siab los ntawm Asmeskas manga lossis cov duab kos duab zoo nkauj, siv qhov ntawd. Yog tias koj xav sim ua qhov kev kos duab tshiab, tsis txhob ua li ntawd. Xaiv ib daim duab uas tsis muaj qhov tshwj xeeb, muaj tus yam ntxwv, thiab muaj peev xwm nthuav qhia koj lub peev xwm ua tus kws kos duab.
Koj kuj yuav tsum xaiv cov duab kos uas yooj yim thiab tsis siv sijhawm ntau dhau. Tom qab tag nrho, tom qab daim ntawv sau tiav, koj tuaj yeem rov kho dua daim duab uas tseem yog duab kos
Kauj Ruam 5. Tsim zaj dab neeg lossis kos duab
Ua ntej, sim ua qhov tshwm sim los ntawm koj cov ntawv tshiab. Tom qab ntawd, hloov qhov xwm txheej mus rau ib daim ntawv dawb paug thiab piav qhia txhua lub vaj huam sib luag kom ntxaws; yog tias tsim nyog, tseem suav nrog cov ntawv lossis kev sib tham hauv lub ces kaum qis. Xav txog qhov zoo tshaj plaws los sawv cev rau cov cim thiab teeb tsa hauv qhov xwm txheej. Tom qab ntawd, sim kos cov duab rau lwm qhov xwm txheej yog li koj paub tias ntxhib koj cov ntawv tshiab yuav zoo li cas thaum nws ua tiav.
Koj tuaj yeem kos txhua lub vaj huam sib luag zoo ib yam lossis sim nrog cov vaj huam sib luag ntawm ntau qhov sib txawv
Kauj Ruam 6. Nyeem qhov luam tawm cov duab tshiab
Txhawm rau nkag siab txog hom ntawv zoo dua, sim nyeem qee cov duab tshiab uas tau tshaj tawm thiab tau muag zoo hauv khw. Nws yog lub tswv yim zoo los nrhiav cov duab tshiab nrog ntau yam kev kos duab los txhawb koj. Sim nyeem:
- Kev Lom Zem Hauv Tsev los ntawm Alison Bechdel.
- Qhov Zoo Tshaj Plaws Peb Ua Tau Los ntawm Thi Bui.
- Ib Lub Caij Ntuj No los ntawm Jillian Tamaki.
- Watchmen los ntawm Alan Moore.
- Lub caij ntuj sov Babe los ntawm Adrian Tomine.
Ntu 2 ntawm 3: Kev Kos Duab
Kauj Ruam 1. Qhia koj tus yam ntxwv thiab teeb tsa rau tus nyeem ntawv
Thawj ob peb nplooj ntawv ntawm koj cov duab tshiab yuav tsum muab rau tus nyeem ntawv lub tswv yim ntawm lub tswv yim loj ntawm koj cov ntawv tshiab. Txog qhov ntawd, pib qhov tshiab nrog ib qho xwm txheej uas qhia txog tus ua cim tseem ceeb ua qee yam hauv qhov chaw tseem ceeb ntawm zaj dab neeg. Koj tseem tuaj yeem pib qhov tshiab nrog kev sib tham thiab cov duab uas muab me ntsis duab ntawm kev tsis sib haum xeeb hauv phau ntawv tshiab.
Piv txwv li, koj tuaj yeem pib koj phau ntawv tshiab nrog qhov xwm txheej uas tus yam ntxwv tseem ceeb tau npaj mus kawm ntawv. Qhia tus yam ntxwv tseem ceeb tus cwj pwm thiab qhia nws lub tsev kawm ntawv ua qhov chaw tseem ceeb ntawm zaj dab neeg
Kauj Ruam 2. Tsim kev tsis sib haum xeeb ntawm cov cim
Zaj dab neeg zoo ib txwm cuam tshuam nrog kev sib cav lossis kev nruj ntawm cov cim; Rau qhov ntawd, tsis txhob ntshai tso koj tus yam ntxwv tseem ceeb rau qhov xwm txheej nyuaj. Muab koj tus cwj pwm tseem ceeb rau lub hom phiaj thiab tso cov teeb meem lossis cov nyom uas ua rau nyuaj rau tus xeeb ceem kom mus txog lub hom phiaj ntawd. Ib qho ntxiv, kev tsis sib haum kuj tuaj yeem tshwm sim ntawm tus yam ntxwv tseem ceeb thiab lwm tus ua cim nyob ib puag ncig nws.
Piv txwv li, koj tuaj yeem tsim kev tsis sib haum xeeb ntawm tus yam ntxwv tseem ceeb thiab nws tus thawj coj ntawm chaw ua haujlwm. Thoob plaws hauv zaj dab neeg, qhia tus yam ntxwv lub dag zog los tawm tsam tus thawj; yog tias koj xav kom muaj qhov tshwj xeeb ntau dua, koj tuaj yeem txawm muab koj tus yam ntxwv tseem ceeb super lub zog uas nws siv tom qab nws tawm tsam nws tus thawj coj
Kauj Ruam 3. Khaws tus yam ntxwv zoo ib yam thoob plaws hauv phau ntawv tshiab
Thaum koj pib kos duab, xyuas kom tseeb tias koj tsom mus rau ob peb yam cim tseem ceeb thiab ua kom lawv zoo ib yam thoob plaws hauv phau ntawv tshiab. Tsis ntseeg, cov ntsiab lus ntawm koj cov ntawv tshiab yuav hnov zoo dua.
- Siv tus xaum xim los kos txhua lub vaj huam sib luag hauv koj daim duab tshiab. Cov xaum ua rau nws yooj yim rau koj los hloov pauv kom ua cim tus yam ntxwv zoo ib yam.
- Piv txwv li, yog tias koj tus xeeb ceem muaj cov plaub hau tshwj xeeb, nco ntsoov tias koj piav qhia nws tas li (lossis tsawg kawg ze li nws yuav tsum yog) thoob plaws hauv phau ntawv tshiab.
Kauj Ruam 4. Npaj ib zaj dab neeg nthuav thiab nthuav dav
Rub tus nyeem ntawv tob dua los ntawm kev nthuav qhia cov ntsiab lus nthuav (xws li cov khoom tshwj xeeb uas cuam tshuam rau kev teeb tsa koj zaj dab neeg). Nco ntsoov, yam koj yuav tsum tau ua tib zoo xav txog tsis yog tsuas yog kev txhim kho tus cwj pwm, tab sis kuj yog kev teeb tsa ntawm zaj dab neeg; Los ntawm kev ua li ntawd, koj zaj dab neeg yuav zoo li ua tiav thiab txaus siab rau cov nyeem.
Yog tias koj cov ntawv tshiab tau teeb tsa hauv tsev kawm rau cov neeg txawv teb chaws, suav nrog teeb tsa cov ntsiab lus xws li qhov chaw nres tsheb tshwj xeeb UFO, phau ntawv hu ua "Yuav Ua Li Cas Ua Phem Rau Tib Neeg," thiab moos phab ntsa nrog lub sijhawm sib txawv
Kauj Ruam 5. Nrog rau kev sib tham uas tuaj yeem tsim cov cim thiab zaj dab neeg
Nco ntsoov, txhua qhov kev sib tham koj xaiv yuav tsum muaj peev xwm sawv cev tus yam ntxwv ntawm tus yam ntxwv hauv koj phau ntawv tshiab. Tsis tas li ntawd, kev sib tham yuav tsum muaj peev xwm txhim kho thiab hais txog cov phiaj xwm ntawm zaj dab neeg. Tsis txhob tham ntau dhau xws li "Nyob Zoo," lossis "Koj Nyob Li Cas?"; Hloov chaw, xaiv kev sib tham uas tshwj xeeb thiab tuaj yeem hais qhia koj tus yam ntxwv.
- Piv txwv li, koj tuaj yeem tsim qee kab ntawm kev sib tham uas tus yam ntxwv tseem ceeb ib txwm hais thaum nws xav tsis thoob, xws li "vwm!" sau "Bah!"
- Qee cov duab tshiab muaj qhov kev sib tham tsawg (lossis tsis muaj kev sib tham txhua). Raws li tus kws sau ntawv, koj muaj txoj cai los txiav txim siab sib txuas lus cov lus hauv zaj dab neeg tshiab los ntawm kev sib tham ntawm tus cwj pwm lossis kev pom qhov tseeb.
Kauj Ruam 6. Xaus qhov tshiab nrog kev daws teeb meem lossis daws teeb meem
Zoo li txhua zaj dab neeg zoo, koj daim duab tshiab yuav tsum xaus nrog kev daws teeb meem lossis teeb meem daws teeb meem xaus. Piv txwv li, tus yam ntxwv tseem ceeb hauv koj phau ntawv tshiab yuav tsum fij qee yam kom tau raws li nws xav tau. Raws li lwm qhov piv txwv, koj tus yam ntxwv tseem ceeb thaum kawg paub qee yam txog lwm tus ua cim thiab xav tias qhov kev tsis sib haum xaus tom qab ntawd. Sim ua qhov kev daws teeb meem uas sib haum nrog cov dab neeg tag nrho kom koj qhov xaus tuaj yeem txaus siab rau tus nyeem ntawv.
Koj tuaj yeem suav nrog cov duab uas piav qhia txog txheej txheem daws teeb meem. Xwb, koj tseem tuaj yeem sau cov lus sib tham ob tus cim tau los daws qhov kev tsis to taub ntawm lawv
Kauj Ruam 7. Yog tias koj tab tom ua cov ntawv tshiab, nco ntsoov tias qhov xaus dai
Ua rau koj cov neeg nyeem xav paub los ntawm suav nrog lo lus "Yuav tsum txuas ntxiv …" thaum kawg ntawm cov ntawv tshiab, lossis suav nrog cov duab uas ua rau tus nyeem ntawv nkag siab tias zaj dab neeg tsis tas.
Ntu 3 ntawm 3: Kho Draft
Kauj Ruam 1. Qhia lwm tus neeg cov ntawv sau txog koj cov duab tshiab thiab nug lawv qhov kev xav
Koj cov ntawv tshiab puas zoo ib yam thiab nthuav rau lawv? Puas yog qhov muag pom ntawm koj cov ntawv tshiab tseem zoo saib? Txhawm rau txhim kho qhov zoo ntawm koj cov duab nraaj tshiab, txaus siab qhib rau kev thuam thiab kev tawm tswv yim los ntawm lwm tus.
Kauj Ruam 2. Nyeem koj phau ntawv tshiab nrov
Mloog seb kev sib tham mus li cas; Puas yog cov kab lus hauv koj cov ntawv tshiab tseem ua suab nrov lossis ntuj? Tseem ceeb yog tias koj tus xeeb ceem muaj kev sib tham tshwj xeeb. Ntseeg kuv, txheeb xyuas kev sib tham hauv cov ntawv tshiab tuaj yeem pab txhim kho cov dab neeg ntawm koj cov ntawv tshiab.
Nyeem cov ntawv tshiab nrov kuj tseem pab koj pom cov ntawv sau tsis raug, cov qauv kab lus, thiab cov cim yuam kev yuam kev
Kauj Ruam 3. Rov tshuaj xyuas cov dab neeg thiab kev txhim kho phiaj xwm hauv koj phau ntawv tshiab
Ua kom ntseeg tau tias txhua qhov xwm txheej hauv koj cov ntawv tshiab txuas nrog ib leeg; Kuj xyuas kom cov phiaj xwm hauv koj cov ntawv tshiab ntws zoo. Kos rau txhua ntu uas xav tias tsis sib haum lossis ntws.
Nco ntsoov tias koj tseem txheeb xyuas cov phiaj xwm kev txhim kho hauv koj cov ntawv tshiab. Qhov zoo tshaj, cov phiaj xwm kev txhim kho hauv koj cov ntawv tshiab yog ua raws cov phiaj xwm phiaj xwm, thiab muaj qhov tsis sib haum xeeb thiab qhov nce siab
Kauj Ruam 4. Rov kho koj cov ntawv tshiab
Xav txog txhua qhov kev thuam thiab cov lus pom koj tau txais los ntawm lwm tus; xav txog koj tus kheej kev xav ib yam nkaus. Ua kom zoo dua ntawm txhua lub ntsiab lus no kom ua tiav; xav tias dawb los pov tseg cov khoom uas tsis tseem ceeb tiag. Hauv lwm lo lus, hloov kho koj cov ntawv tshiab kom ua rau nws nthuav dua thiab cuam tshuam rau tus nyeem ntawv.
Kauj Ruam 5. Ua siab tawv thiab xim koj cov ntawv tshiab
Koj tuaj yeem ua cov txheej txheem no tus kheej lossis nrog kev pab ntawm lub khoos phis tawj. Yog tias koj ua qhov no ntawm tus kheej, nco ntsoov tias koj lwv cov cim cwj mem uas tseem nyob tom qab koj tau ua siab tawv rau daim duab.
