Kev kawm sib dhos tuaj yeem tso cai rau koj ntxiv qhov muaj zog thiab zoo nkauj rau cov nkauj thiab paj huam. Tab sis koj yuav pom lwm yam lus sib dhos li cas "miv" thiab "kaus mom"? Puas muaj cov lus sib dhos nrog "txiv kab ntxwv"? Koj yuav ua li cas sau cov lus sib dhos ua nkauj, lossis sonnet? Koj tuaj yeem kawm paub daws cov lus sib dhos no nrog wikiHow cov lus qhia rau paj huam, nkauj hauv tebchaws, nkauj nkauj, lossis raps. Nyeem Kauj Ruam 1 kom paub ntau ntxiv.
Kauj ruam
Txoj Kev 1 ntawm 4: Rhymes Zoo
Kauj Ruam 1. Xav txog txhua qhov ua tau lus sib dhos ua ntej txiav txim siab ib qho
Hloov cov lus ua ntej siv txhua tsab ntawv hauv tus niam ntawv. Piv txwv, yog tias koj xav tshawb nrhiav lo lus uas sib dhos nrog "huab", pib nrog tsab ntawv A thiab hais "aog, bog, cog, dev, eog, … zog," kom txog thaum koj mus txog tsab ntawv Z. Sau txhua lo lus siv tau, xws li "bog," "cog," thiab "dev", tom qab ntawv xaiv tsuas yog qhov ntxim nyiam tshaj plaws. Yog tias ib tus tsis ua haujlwm, hloov kab thib ib kom phim cov paj huam lossis nkauj.
Thaum sau cov tsiaj ntawv ib tus, sau R lossis L rau hauv cov lus luv luv tuaj yeem tsim lwm lo lus. Yog li yog tias koj tshawb nrhiav lo lus uas sib dhos nrog "miv", koj tuaj yeem pom ob qho "puav" thiab "brat"; "rog" ntxiv rau "tiaj" thiab "frat". Nov yog qhov tshwj xeeb hais lus sib dhos dag
Kauj Ruam 2. Muab cov lus sib dhos ua lus ntev
Siv lwm cov ntawv ntau tus ntawv ua ntej koj paub los tsim cov lus nyuaj rau sib dhos. Thawj cov ntawv tsis tas ua haujlwm. Piv txwv, "qav" thiab "clog" yog cov lus tiag tiag uas sib dhos nrog "bog". Sim cov lus nrog ntau lub suab lus xws li "bullfrog" lossis "epilogue."
Kauj Ruam 3. Xaiv cov lus uas tsim nyog xwb
Yog tias tsis muaj ib lo lus ua haujlwm tau zoo, txiav txim siab hloov lo lus tseem ceeb rau lub ntsiab lus rau lo lus, lossis tso cov lus sib dhos ntawm kab lossis ob. Piv txwv li, koj tuaj yeem hloov lo lus "pos huab" nrog "pos huab", tab sis tsuas yog siv cov lus sib dhos uas yuav ua rau paj huam lossis nkauj zoo dua, thiab tsis txhob sib dhos vim koj xav tau.
Kauj Ruam 4. Siv cov lus sib dhos sib txawv
Kev sib dhos zoo meej "suab" zoo rau peb pob ntseg vim nws zoo ib yam ua ke ntawm cov tsiaj ntawv thiab cov ntawv sib txuas. "Hli" thiab "diav" yog cov lus sib dhos zoo tshaj plaws vim tias lawv lub suab "o" ntev thiab lawv lub suab "n". Assonance rhymes yog lus sib dhos uas vowels lossis consonants zoo sib xws, tsim cov lus sib dhos sib dhos, thiab muab ntau yam rau koj.
"Lub hli" tuaj yeem xav txog kev sib dhos nrog "ntawm" lossis "schooner" lossis "groom" lossis "gong". Assonance rhyme muab qhov nyuaj thiab xav tsis thoob rau qhov ua kom tiav cov lus sib dhos
Kauj Ruam 5. Qhib phau ntawv txhais lus sib dhos
Kev nqis peev los ntawm kev yuav cov phau ntawv txhais lus sib dhos kom siv los ua tus siv yog tsim nyog tau txais txiaj ntsig. Siv phau ntawv txhais lus sib dhos tsis suav nrog kev dag, ib yam li siv phau ntawv sau thaum sau ntawv. Kev kawm cov lus sib dhos zoo tseem yuav tsim koj cov lus, muab koj cov lus uas koj tuaj yeem siv los tsim cov nkauj, paj huam, lossis lwm yam haujlwm dawb-ntawv.
Kauj Ruam 6. Ib txwm siv cov lus sib dhos los txhawb txoj haujlwm
Rhyming yog txheej txheem uas cov kws sau ntawv thiab kws sau nkauj tuaj yeem siv hauv lawv cov ntawv los sau cov lus thiab cov duab thiab nthuav tawm cov paj huam uas nyuaj thiab tsis txaus ntseeg. Siv cov lus sib dhos los ntxiv qhov kov cov xim thiab kev ntxhib los mos rau koj txoj haujlwm, tab sis tsis yog kev zam txim los tsim nws. Yog tias qee yam xav tau sib dhos, siv nws zoo. Yog tsis yog, cia li ua.
Txoj Kev 2 ntawm 4: Rhymes hauv Paj Huam
Kauj Ruam 1. Sau dawb
Thaum koj tau ntsib nrog daim ntawv dawb ntawm daim ntawv thiab xav sau nws nrog paj huam, nws yog qhov zoo tshaj kom zam kev sib dhos tag nrho hauv thawj daim ntawv sau tseg. Sim pib nrog cov lus sib dhos feem ntau yuav xaus rau hauv lub tiaj tus miv-lub kaus mom-sib dhos sib dhos thiab paj huam tsis zoo. Hloov chaw, sau ib nqe lossis phau ntawv sau dawb thiab saib nws hais dab tsi. Koj xav hais dab tsi? Pib nrog kab lossis daim duab uas ua rau koj zoo siab thiab ua haujlwm koj txoj hauv kev mus rau cov khoom siv raw uas koj yuav tsim mus rau hauv cov txheej txheem ntau dua, cov paj huam hais sib haum.
Kauj Ruam 2. Nrhiav qhov bar qhia
Tom qab sau ntawv ib pliag, tig koj daim ntawv, lossis qhib ib lo lus tshiab ua cov ntaub ntawv. Coj koj txoj kab uas koj nyiam tshaj plaws los ntawm kev sau dawb thiab sau nws rau saum toj ntawm nplooj ntawv. Dab tsi ua rau koj xav txog qhov no? Dab tsi zoo txog nws? Siv qhov no los qhia rau kev sau paj huam. Tshawb xyuas lub hauv paus ntawm kev sib cav lossis kev piav qhia uas kab ntawv muaj.
Feem ntau, kev sau ntawv dawb yuav xaus nrog txoj kab zoo uas koj yuav xav siv thaum pib. Saib ob peb kab lus kawg rau kab lus qhia
Kauj Ruam 3. Xav txog cov qauv paj huam tsim nyog
Yog tias koj xav sau cov paj huam raug, nkag siab cov ntawv sib dhos sib xws thiab lawv siv los xaiv qhov uas yuav ua haujlwm zoo tshaj plaws rau lub ntsiab lus ntawm koj cov paj huam.
- Couplets, lossis txuas txuas tus phab ej, sawv cev rau txhua zaj paj huam uas sib dhos txhua ob kab. Siv los ntawm cov kws sau paj huam los ntawm Milton mus rau Frederick Seidel, kev sib koom ua ke tuaj yeem muab qhov kev xav zoo nkauj thiab lub ntiajteb txawj nqus.
- Cov paj huam uas hais txog quaternary, lossis plaub kab kab, tuaj yeem sib dhos nrog cov lus sib dhos sib dhos yooj yim (ABAB) lossis lwm lub tswv yim. Ballads thiab nkauj tau sau tseg ib txwm nyob hauv quatrains, ua rau lawv yog ib qho zoo ntawm kev hais dab neeg lossis suab paj nruag dab neeg.
- Hauv villanelle, tag nrho kab ntawm thawj kab lus tau rov ua dua los ntawm ib kab peb kab mus rau lwm qhov, nrog thawj kab thiab kab kawg ntawm kab lus sib dhos, muab zaj paj huam ua rau tsis hnov qab, zoo li koj tsis tuaj yeem khiav paj huam.
- Ib tus sonnet yog 14 kab lus paj huam uas muaj ib nrab lus nyuab, npaj ua lus sib dhos ua ke, nrog txog 10 lub suab lus lossis tsib tus neeg ntaus ib kab. Feem ntau cov sonnets sau ua lus Askiv feem ntau Petrarch (ABBA) lossis Shakespeare (ABAB) sonnets, nrog cov lus sib dhos sib dhos rau ob kab kawg). Sonnets feem ntau cuam tshuam nrog lub ntsiab lus rhetorical lossis "kev sib cav", hais txog qhov xav tsis thoob hauv paj huam tom qab kab thib yim.
Kauj Ruam 4. Siv cov lus sib dhos los tsim kev xav tsis thoob thiab ntxiv qhov nyuaj rau cov paj huam
Koj cov lus sib dhos yuav tsum pab paj huam, thiab tsis hloov pauv, paj huam yuav tsum pab sib dhos. Tsis txhob sib dhos tsuas yog vim koj xav tias koj yuav tsum tau, lossis pib paj huam vam tias yuav sib dhos. Qhov no yuav ua rau hom kev yuam "miv-lub kaus mom" lus sib dhos uas yuav ua rau tsis zoo ntxiv qhov kev zoo nkauj rau zaj paj huam.
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Paul Muldoon, kws sau paj huam Irish, muaj qhov xav tsis thoob txog qhov sib dhos. Nws cov paj huam "Lub Tebchaws Qub" yog qhov ua tiav ntawm ib tus sonnet uas hais txog kev dag thiab kev sib dhos tsis txaus ntseeg:
Txhua qhov kev sib tw yog Rubicon / thiab txhua txhua xyoo ib xyoos nyuaj / thov nws tus kheej zoo li ntaub pua chaw rau cov nyom. / Txhua lub hnab looj tes tau tuav phau ntawv qhia
Kauj Ruam 5. Nyeem cov paj huam niaj hnub rau kev tshoov siab
Kev sau paj huam tam sim no uas sib dhos tau zoo yog qhov nyuaj yog tias koj tsuas paub nrog Shakespeare, Wordsworth, thiab Dr. Seuss. Tsis muaj laj thawj ua kom Twitter, Frosted Flakes, thiab Lil Wayne tawm ntawm koj cov paj huam tsuas yog vim kab ntawv puv ntawm "koj." Nrhiav cov kws sau paj huam niaj hnub uas sib dhos hauv txoj kev tshiab tab sis ib txwm muaj:
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Sim nrhiav kom paub txog Michael Robbins, leej twg hauv nws zaj paj huam zoo nkauj Alien vs.
Nws yog tsob ntoo qhov chaw / ua caij ski thiab me ntsis ua npuas chiropractor. / Kuv teeb tsa kev tswj hwm, Kuv yog tus pioneer / cov noob ntawm ionosphere. / Kuv txhais phau Vajlugkub ua velociraptor
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Nyeem Ange Mlinko, kws sau paj huam uas txawj txawj txaus los sau paj huam "qos" nrog "tattoo" kom xaus nws cov paj huam "The Grind":
diav Aphrodite / rau Greek porticoes, thiab peb cov qos yaj ywm, / thiab kev ua neej nyob yooj yim uas tej zaum yuav / tshee hnyo los ntawm kev kos duab tsis kawg
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"Kev puas tsuaj" los ntawm Seamus Heaney tswj hwm qhov tseem ceeb ntawm lub neej niaj hnub, yog piav qhia, suab paj nruag thiab yooj yim heev rau nyeem. Nws yog tus kws sau paj huam zoo, uas ua rau sib dhos zoo li yooj yim:
Thiab tsa tus ntiv tes xoo qhuav / Rau ntawm lub txee siab, / Hu rau lwm lub rum / Thiab blackcurrant, tsis muaj / Yuav tsum tsa nws lub suab
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David Trinidad-tus kws sau paj huam uas feem ntau sau txog kev coj noj coj ua hauv xyoo 1960-qhia nws paub zoo ntawm daim ntawv villanelle nrog nws cov paj huam lom zem thiab txav mus los "Chatty Cathy Villanelle":
Peb tus chij yog liab, dawb thiab xiav. / Cia peb ntseeg tias koj yog Niam. / Thaum koj loj tuaj, koj yuav ua dab tsi?
Txoj Kev 3 ntawm 4: Rhyming in Songwriting
Kauj Ruam 1. Sau cov nkauj ua ntej
Nws yog qhov nyuaj heev uas yuav npaj ua lus paj huam ua ntej thiab cov lus rau zaj nkauj uas ua raws. Qee tus kws sau nkauj pom nws yooj yim dua los sau cov nkauj thiab tom qab ntawd sau cov nkauj uas muaj cov nkauj thiab cov qauv ntawm zaj nkauj.
- Ntau tus kws sau nkauj xav tias lub suab hu nkauj lossis lub suab nrov nrov tuaj yeem pab teeb tsa suab paj nruag lossis tsim cov duab yooj yim uas tuaj yeem sau nrog cov lus.
- Xaiv cov txheej txheem uas ua haujlwm zoo tshaj rau koj cov txheej txheem tsim paj huam. Bob Dylan, txiav txim siab los ntawm qee tus los ua tus sau nkauj zoo tshaj plaws, feem ntau sau cov lus ua ntej. Sim.
Kauj Ruam 2. Kawm kom "hloov" kab lus
Cov txheej txheem nrov thiab tseem ceeb hauv suab paj nruag hauv tebchaws, cov nkauj zoo feem ntau tuaj yeem "hloov" rau hauv kab lus, lossis siv kab los piav qhia ntau dua ib lub ntsiab lus thoob plaws zaj nkauj, yog siv nyob rau lub sijhawm sib txawv.
Hauv Kacey Musgraves zaj nkauj "Blowing Smoke," kab lus "tshuab pa" yog siv ntawm cov ntsiab lus sib txawv kom xa mus rau tus neeg tos tos haus luam yeeb ntawm nws so, nrog rau kev khav theeb txog kev txiav ib hnub, ob leeg los ntawm kev ua haujlwm thiab los ntawm kev haus luam yeeb. Nov yog txheej txheem zoo uas hloov lub ntsiab lus tab sis tsis yog lo lus
Kauj Ruam 3. Siv ob peb lo lus ntau li ntau tau
Zam kev sau kab nrog cov lus, ua rau koj zaj nkauj nyuaj rau tus nplaig twister hu nkauj. Thaum sau nkauj, siv cov lus kom zoo, tshem tawm cov lus ntau dua li nchuav rau hauv. Yooj yim, lus sib dhos nrawm tuaj yeem ua tau zoo dua hauv nkauj dua li cov lus "paj huam".
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Hauv "The Butcher," Leonard Cohen ua lub suab paj nruag luv luv hais txog kev siv tshuaj:
Kuv pom ib rab koob nyiaj. Kuv muab tso rau hauv kuv txhais tes. / Nws tau ua qee qhov zoo, tau ua qee yam raug mob
Kauj Ruam 4. Sim cov duab tsis siv neeg
Tus kws sau ntawv tshiab thiab Tus kws sau ntawv William Burroughs tau pib ua txoj hauv kev sau ntawv uas koom nrog txiav tawm cov lus sib dhos thiab kab lus, tom qab ntawd muab pov tseg. Sim ua qhov qub thiab tshem tawm cov kab lus tsis raug los xaws ntaub pua plag ntawm qhov tsis sib xws hauv koj zaj nkauj. Suab paj nruag qhib heev rau hom kev sau ntawv no.
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Rolling Stones siv cov txheej txheem no rau lawv zaj nkauj "Casino Boogie":
Ib lub voj voog kawg, zoo siab tsis txaus ntseeg txiv ntxawm Sam / Pause rau kev lag luam, yog li koj yuav nkag siab
Txoj Kev 4 ntawm 4: Rhymes in Hip-Hop Songs
Kauj Ruam 1. Mloog qhov ntaus thiab pom koj tus kheej ntws
Siv sijhawm ntau nrog lub suab paj nruag koj xav rap, sab hauv lub suab thiab kev sib dhos, txhawm rau txheeb xyuas qhov ntws ntawm koj lub suab ua ntej pib xav txog cov nkauj. Zoo li sau cov nkauj hauv zaj nkauj ib txwm ua ntej, thawj zaug koj yuav tsum nrhiav qhov dej ntws zoo hauv zaj nkauj rap.
- Qee tus rappers yuav siv cov txheej txheem "lo lus tsis tseem ceeb" zoo ib yam, uas yog ua kom suab nrov nrov tsis hais lo lus tseeb. Sim sau koj tus kheej ua qhov no, txawm tias nws suab tsis zoo, vim tias qhov zoo yuav tawm los ntawm qhov tsis pom qhov twg.
- Kev rap zoo hais txog kev ntws nrog rau cov lus sib dhos yooj yim. Nyob ntawm kev ntaus yeej zoo dua li poob qhov kev sib tw thiab sim yuam cov lus sib dhos uas txawv txav rau hauv cov qauv ntawm zaj nkauj.
Kauj Ruam 2. Ua txoj kev ywj pheej
Zoo li kev sau nkauj dawb hauv kev sau paj huam, sim ua ywj siab yog txoj hauv kev zoo kom pib thiab nrhiav kab pib hauv kev sau nkauj. Lossis, yog tias koj yog Riff Raff, tsuas yog sau koj li kev ywj pheej thiab xav txog nws li nkauj.
Kauj Ruam 3. Kawm thiab ua kom zoo dua ntawm kev nyiam
Tsis muaj txoj cai hais tias kev sib dhos xav tau tshwm ntawm qhov kawg ntawm txhua kab, tshwj xeeb tshaj yog hauv hip-hop, lossis cov lus uas sib dhos yuav tsum yog qhov kawg ntawm kab lus. Hloov qhov kev tso kawm ntawm cov lus sib dhos. Cov kua nplaum sib dhos sab hauv thiab hla cov lus sib dhos ua tiav kom ntxiv ntau yam rau lub suab ntws. Koj tsis tas yuav hais lus sib dhos thaum kawg ntawm txhua kab kom zoo nkauj.
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Hauv zaj nkauj "Duel of the Iron Mic," GZA tsim kev sib zog muaj zog hauv kab ntawm zaj nkauj, siv qhov chaw zoo so hauv kev ntaus kom peb xav tsis thoob:
Kuv tsis yog tshwj xeeb, Kuv tsoo zoo li tsheb / tua neeg, thaum Lub Xya Hli 4th hauv Bed-Stuy
Kauj Ruam 4. Mloog cov kws tshaj lij suab paj nruag hip-hop rau kev tshoov siab
Paub koj tus kheej nrog qhov zoo tshaj plaws, los ntawm kev mloog ntau yam lus sib dhos kom pib kawm paub kos duab. Mloog:
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Nas, uas tau poob rau hauv ntiaj teb no thaum nws tseem hluas nrog nws cov nkauj qub Illmatic, uas muaj cov kab hauv qab no:
Nws dauv tob li nws ua rau kuv ua tsis taus pa / Kuv yeej tsis tsaug zog, ua rau pw tsaug zog yog tus npawg tuag
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Eminem, nws cov nkauj sib dhos zoo heev ua rau nws ua tus vaj ntxwv zoo ntawm rap:
Kuv yog Slim, Shady tiag tiag yog tus cuav cuav / cawm kuv nrog yog tias kuv raug caum los ntawm cov neeg txawv teb chaws
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Rakim, yog ib tus MCs muaj feem cuam tshuam tshaj plaws hauv hip-hop:
Txawm hais tias nws yog jazz lossis cua daj cua dub ntsiag to / Kuv nqes los, hloov nws mus rau hauv daim ntawv hip-hop
Lub tswv yim
- Ua tib zoo saib cov naj npawb ntawm cov kab lus hauv txhua kab. Koj yeej tsis xav kom muaj kab nrog cov suab lus ntau dua li lwm cov kab.
- Siv chav kawm paj huam lossis sau nkauj.
- Koj tuaj yeem yuav phau ntawv txhais lus sib dhos ntawm lub khw muag ntawv, uas yuav pab koj ntau nrog kev sib dhos, lossis siv phau ntawv txhais lus online.
- Nug phooj ywg thiab tsev neeg kom tau kev pab.
- Sim tsis txhob ua cov lus uas muaj cov lus xaus uas tsis tshua muaj suab lus, koj yuav muaj lub sijhawm nyuaj nrhiav cov lus sib dhos.
