Koj puas tau taug kev tawm ntawm lub tsev ua yeeb yaj kiab thiab hais tias, "Kuv xav tias kuv tuaj yeem sau zaj dab neeg zoo dua li zaj yeeb yaj kiab ntawd?" Qhov tseeb, ntau lub tswv yim ua yeeb yaj kiab zoo tuaj yeem nyuaj rau xav thiab kev tshuaj ntsuam zoo tuaj yeem nyuaj rau kev sau. Sau ntawv rau xinesmas, tshwj xeeb yog lub vijtsam loj, txhais tau tias koj tsim qee yam uas yog tsim los rau kev tshaj xov xwm. Thaum nws tuaj yeem nyuaj ua kom tau zoo, kev ua yeeb yaj kiab zoo muaj lub zog los hloov cov neeg saib lub neej.
Kauj ruam
Ntu 1 ntawm 3: Npaj Sau
Kauj Ruam 1. Txheeb xyuas daim foos ntawm qhov xwm txheej
Tsis zoo li cov dab neeg luv luv lossis cov dab neeg, kev tshuaj ntsuam yog ua los ntawm kev sib tham, ntau dua li kev hais lus lossis kev piav qhia. Txoj cai tseem ceeb ntawm kev sau cov yeeb yaj kiab yog: koj sau kom pom kev. Zaj duab xis yog kab duab, yog li cov duab hauv qhov screenplay koj tsim yuav tsum muaj zog thiab txaus nyiam.
- Lwm txoj cai yog qhov no: Txhua kab lus ntawm kev coj ua yuav tsum yog peb kab lossis tsawg dua. Qhov no txhais tau tias cov lus piav qhia ntawm cov khaub ncaws uas cov cim hnav lossis txoj kev lawv ua hauv qhov xwm txheej yuav tsum tsis pub ntev tshaj 3 kab. Siv ob peb lo lus ntau li ntau tau los piav qhia qhov kev nqis tes ua lossis teeb tsa, thiab cia kev sib tham ua qhov kev sib tham.
- Lub keeb kwm yav dhau thiab kev txhawb siab ntawm tus ua cim yuav tsum pom los ntawm kev nqis tes ua thiab sib tham ntawm tus ua cim, tsis yog hauv kev piav qhia hauv qhov xwm txheej. Cov kws sau ntawv zoo tshaj yuav khaws cov lus piav qhia ntawm tus cwj pwm tsis pub ntau tshaj ob kab hauv kab lus thoob plaws tsab ntawv. Txawm li cas los xij, qhov kev piav qhia tseem tuaj yeem pom los ntawm lub zog ntawm kev sib tham.
- Siv lub sijhawm tam sim no los sau qhov xwm txheej. Qhov no yuav ua rau txhua qhov xwm txheej tshwm sim hauv koj qhov xwm txheej, thiab qhov ntawd yog qhov xwm txheej zoo li cas rau: txhawm rau ua qhov kev ua thiab cov cim mus tom ntej.
- Zoo li lwm tus, muaj qee qhov kev zam rau txoj cai sau tsuas yog peb kab ntawm ib qho xwm txheej. Piv txwv li, qhov kev tshuaj ntsuam rau zaj duab xis xyoo 2011 "All is Lost" los ntawm J. C. Candor thiab starring Robert Redford, tsuas muaj 4-5 kab kev sib tham hauv txhua qhov xwm txheej. Feem ntau ntawm cov kev ua uas cov cim ua tau qhia los ntawm kev piav qhia ntev. Hom xwm txheej no tsis tshua muaj thiab nyuaj rau tsim kom zoo.
Kauj Ruam 2. Paub koj tus kheej nrog cov xwm txheej
Cov xwm txheej raug teeb tsa sib txawv dua li lwm hom kev sau ntawv. Scenario formatting yog qhov tshwj xeeb thiab tuaj yeem suav nrog kev siv ntau ntawm "tab" thiab "nkag" cov yuam sij yog tias koj tab tom siv cov ntaub ntawv ua software hauv computer. Koj tuaj yeem siv software uas tuaj yeem teeb tsa nws rau koj, xws li Daim Qauv Kawg, Scrivener, thiab Movie Magic. Koj kuj tseem tuaj yeem siv qhov yooj yim ntawm qhov program los teeb tsa cov xwm txheej pub dawb hauv is taws nem. Ua tib zoo saib xyuas ib feem ntawm qhov xwm txheej, xws li:
- "Kab kab": Kab kab slug tau sau ua CAPITAL cov tsiaj ntawv thaum pib ntawm qhov xwm txheej thiab piav qhia me ntsis txog qhov chaw nyob thiab sijhawm ntawm qhov chaw. Piv txwv li: INT. DINNER - YOG. Qee zaum txoj kab slug tau luv dua rau "NIGHT" lossis "ROOM".
- INT/EXT: INT sawv rau "sab hauv" hauv qhov chaw, piv txwv li INT HOME, thiab EXT sawv rau "sab nrauv" lossis keeb kwm yav dhau uas nyob sab nraud, xws li EXT HOME.
- Kev hloov pauv: Kev hloov pauv pab koj txav ntawm qhov chaw mus rau qhov xwm txheej hauv qhov xwm txheej. Piv txwv ntawm kev hloov pauv yog FADE IN thiab FADE OUT, uas yog qhib thiab kaw qeeb kom mus rau qhov xwm txheej tom ntej, thiab CUT TO, uas txhais tau tias ncaj qha mus rau qhov xwm txheej tshiab. Koj tseem tuaj yeem siv DISSOLVE TO thaum qhov xwm txheej xaus thiab qhov xwm txheej tom ntej maj mam tshwm sim los hloov nws.
- ZOO TSHAJ PLAWS TSHUAJ TIV THAIV: Qhov no qhia tias lub koob yees duab tau kaw ib tus neeg lossis qee yam ze. Piv txwv li: “Kaw rau ntawm Mia lub ntsej muag.”
- ZOO TSHAJ PLAWS ZOO TSHAJ PLAWS: Qhov no tau sau thaum cov duab tsis txav mus los thiab dhau los ua daim duab ntawm lub vijtsam.
- np.: "b.g" sawv rau "keeb kwm yav dhau" lossis "keeb kwm yav dhau" kom nco ntsoov thaum qee yam tshwm sim tom qab tus yam ntxwv tseem ceeb. Koj tuaj yeem siv "b.g" lossis "keeb kwm yav dhau" los sau nws hauv qhov xwm txheej. Piv txwv li: “Ob tus cim sib ntaus hauv b.g”.
- OS los yog O. C.: Lo lus no sawv rau “tawm-screen” lossis “off-camera”. Qhov no txhais tau tias tus neeg lub suab yuav hnov txawm tias daim duab tsis raug kaw lossis hnov los ntawm lwm qhov ntawm keeb kwm yav dhau los. Piv txwv li: "Heri qw ntawm Salman O. S.".
- V. O.: Lo lus no sawv rau “lub suab dhau”, uas yog thaum tus neeg ua yeeb yam nyeem kev sib tham yam tsis tau kaw hauv qhov xwm txheej thiab piav qhia qhov tshwm sim. Cov ntawv luv no tau sau nyob rau hauv tus ua cim lub npe ua ntej "lub suab dhau.
- Montage: Cov duab ntawm cov duab uas qhia lub ntsiab lus, qhov tsis sib xws, lossis dhau sijhawm. Montage feem ntau yog siv los qhia qhov txav ntawm lub sijhawm hauv ib qho ntawm qhov screen.
- Taug qab tua: Lo lus no txhais tau tias yog lub koob yees duab tom qab tus yam ntxwv lossis yam khoom. Tsuav lub koob yees duab tsis xauv qhov twg lossis ntawm lub koob yees duab thiab ua raws cov ncauj lus, nws yog hu ua kev taug qab.
Kauj Ruam 3. Saib qee qhov piv txwv piv txwv
Muaj ntau qhov xwm txheej uas yuav luag zoo tag nrho, xws li kev ua yeeb yaj kiab rau zaj yeeb yaj kiab xyoo 1942 "Casablanca". Lwm qhov piv txwv piv txwv tuaj yeem qhia ob peb txoj hauv kev los hloov cov duab ntawm qhov xwm txheej. Piv txwv li:
- "Nws Tus Ntxhais Hnub Friday", sau los ntawm Charles Lederer.
- "Pulp Fiction", ua yeeb yaj kiab sau los ntawm Quentin Tarantino.
- "Thaum Harry ntsib Sally", kev tshuaj ntsuam sau los ntawm Nora Ephron.
- "Thelma & Louise", ua yeeb yaj kiab sau los ntawm Callie Khouri.
Kauj Ruam 4. Saib cov lus hauv kab lus hauv qhov piv txwv piv txwv saum toj no
Ntu npe qhia txog kev teeb tsa ntawm qhov xwm txheej, qee zaum nrog lub sijhawm tshwj xeeb lossis dav dav.
- Hauv "Thelma & Louise" qhov xwm txheej, thawj qhov xwm txheej muaj kab slug: "INT. RESTAURANT - MORNING (PRESENT DAY) ".
- Hauv qhov "Thaum Harry ntsib Sally" qhov xwm txheej, thawj qhov xwm txheej muaj kab slug uas tsis qhia qhov chaw tshwj xeeb lossis teeb tsa: "DOCUMENTARY FOOTAGE". Qhov no qhia tias zaj yeeb yaj kiab yuav pib nrog cov ntaub ntawv sau cia tsis yog qhov xwm txheej hauv ib qho chaw tshwj xeeb.
Kauj Ruam 5. Sau cov lus piav qhia ntawm qhov chaw thiab cim
Cov ntsiab lus no yuav tsum tau sau ua ob peb lo lus ntau li ntau tau, tab sis nthuav dav.
- Hauv "Thelma & Louise" qhov xwm txheej, muaj kab lus qhib txog Louise tus yam ntxwv:
- Tus kws sau ntawv nthuav qhia cov lus piav qhia ntawm Louise los ntawm nws txoj haujlwm ("tus neeg tos hauv khw kas fes"), khaub ncaws thiab tsos ("thaum nws muaj hnub nyoog peb caug xyoo, tab sis tsis laus dhau los ua tus tos," "zoo nkauj heev thiab zoo nraug") thiab nws qhov kev ua ("muab khob tsis zoo tso tseg," "ROUGH, uas nws tau ua raws lub hom phiaj"). Lub xub ntiag ntawm cov suab (sau hauv cov tsiaj ntawv loj hauv qhov xwm txheej) xws li "lub teb chaws muzak", tseem piav qhia qhov teeb tsa hauv ob peb lo lus.
- Hauv "Pulp Fiction", muaj kab lus qhib uas piav qhia qhov teeb tsa:
- Tarantino muab cov ncauj lus qhia ntxaws ntxaws txog pes tsawg tus neeg nyob hauv qhov chaw ("ntau tus neeg", cov txiv neej hluas thiab cov ntxhais hluas), thiab nws qhia tshwj xeeb tab sis piav qhia luv luv ntawm ob tus cim no. Tag nrho cov ntsiab lus no tsim kev nkag siab yooj yim ntawm cov lus piav qhia thiab cov cim uas yuav tsim los ntawm kev sib tham.
LOUISE yog tus tos hauv khw kas fes. Nws nyob hauv nws lub hnub nyoog peb caug xyoo, tab sis tsis laus dhau los ua tub qhe. Nws zoo nkauj heev thiab ua kom zoo zoo, txawm tias tom qab nws ua haujlwm tas lawm. Nws muab cov khob qias neeg ntxhib rau hauv lub tais hauv qab lub txee. Nws cov kev ua tau tsim qhov ruckus, uas nws tau ua ntawm lub hom phiaj. TEB CHAWS MUZAK tau ua si hauv b.g, thiab nws ua suab nrov rau lub suab nkauj.
Denny nyob hauv nws ib txwm muaj, café zoo li Spiers hauv Los Angeles. Nws yog 9:00 tam sim no. Txawm hais tias qhov chaw tsis puv heev, muaj qee leej neeg haus kas fes, noj nqaij npuas kib thiab noj qe.
Ob ntawm lawv yog txiv neej hluas thiab poj niam hluas. Tus Txiv Neej Hluas tau hais lus me ntsis ntawm chav ua haujlwm Askiv thiab, zoo li Askiv, nws haus luam yeeb zoo li nws tsis zoo.
Nws nyuaj heev los txiav txim tias Tus Poj Niam Hluas tuaj qhov twg tuaj thiab nws muaj hnub nyoog li cas; txhua yam nws ua tam sim no yog qhov txawv ntawm qhov nws siv los ua. Nkawd ob leeg zaum ntawm lub rooj. Lawv cov kev sib tham tau hais ntawm lub nrawm nrawm xws li "HIS GIRL FRIDAY".
Kauj Ruam 6. Saib cov lus sib tham hauv qhov piv txwv piv txwv
Feem ntau cov xwm txheej tau sau nrog kev sib tham, tab sis qhov no tsis yog yam tsis muaj laj thawj. Kev sib tham yog lub cuab yeej tseem ceeb uas tus kws sau ntawv yuav tsum qhia zaj dab neeg hauv zaj yeeb yaj kiab. Pom zoo tias qee tus cim siv cov lus hauv lawv qhov kev sib tham.
- Piv txwv li, Tarantino muaj tus cwj pwm hu ua Jules hauv zaj yeeb yaj kiab “Pulp Fiction” uas siv cov lus slang xws li “Whaddya txhais li cas? "Ntau dua" Koj txhais li cas?”(“Koj txhais li cas?”) Thiab suav nrog kev sib cav hauv Jules kev sib tham. Qhov no pab ua kom Jules 'tus yam ntxwv zoo ib yam nrog nws tus yam ntxwv.
- Hauv "Thelma & Louise", Louise tus yam ntxwv siv "Yexus Khetos" thiab "rau Vajtswv lub hom phiaj" thoob plaws nws qhov kev sib tham. Qhov no yog qhov sib txawv ntawm Thelma qhov kev hais lus ntau dua thiab paub cai. Los ntawm qhov ua qhov no, tus kws sau ntawv, Khouri, teeb tsa ob lub cim tawm tsam ib leeg thiab qhia cov neeg tuaj saib seb txhua tus ua cim xav li cas thiab ua haujlwm thoob plaws hauv kev sib tham.
Kauj Ruam 7. Nco tseg qhov muaj txiaj ntsig ntawm kev piav qhia lossis kev coj tus cwj pwm hauv kev sib tham
Tus cue pom yog cov lus luv luv ntawm cov lus piav qhia ua ntej kev sib tham tau hais. Cov ntawv no yuav raug sau siv cov ntawv txuas ua ntej tus cim sib tham.
- Piv txwv li, hauv "Thaum Harry ntsib Sally", Ephron sau tseg "(ua suab nrov)" ua ntej Harry tham. Nov yog cov ntawv me me tab sis nws qhia tau meej tias Harry muaj kev nkag siab zoo thiab kev hais lus raws li tus yam ntxwv.
- Qhov no tseem tuaj yeem ua tiav nrog tsuas yog ib lo lus piav qhia ntawm kev sib tham. Hauv "Pulp Fiction", Tarantino sau tseg tias tus neeg tos tus neeg coj tus cwj pwm "(siab tawv)" thaum hais ib yam dab tsi rau ib tus ntawm cov cim. Cov lus piav qhia no ua rau tus neeg tos ib tus cwj pwm thiab muab cov ntsiab lus rau kev sib tham.
- Tsuas yog muab cov lus txiav txim thaum xav tau. Tsis txhob cia siab rau cov lus txib ntawm tus cwj pwm los qhia zaj dab neeg. Kev sib tham thiab kev ua ntawm cov cim yuav tsum muaj peev xwm qhia qhov tshwm sim tau zoo, yam tsis tau hais kom coj tus cwj pwm.
Kauj Ruam 8. Pom tias qhov xwm txheej txav ntawm qhov chaw mus rau qhov xwm txheej
Cov xwm txheej feem ntau yuav txav ntawm qhov chaw mus rau qhov chaw nrog "CUT TO:" ceeb toom qhia tias yuav raug txiav los ntawm qhov chaw mus rau qhov chaw. Kev cog qoob loo yuav tsum tsuas yog ua thaum koj tsiv mus rau qhov tshwm sim tshiab lossis duab. Hauv "Pulp Fiction", muaj ob lub cim sib tham hauv lub tsheb thiab tom qab ntawd ob lub cim zoo li qhib lub cev ntawm lub tsheb.
Koj kuj tseem tuaj yeem pom daim ntawv ceeb toom: "FADE IN" lossis "FADE OUT". Fade in feem ntau yog ua tiav thaum pib ntawm zaj yeeb yaj kiab, zoo li hauv zaj yeeb yaj kiab "Thaum Harry ntsib Sally", thiab thaum kawg uas hu ua fade tawm. Fade in muab qhov qhib maj mam qhib rau qhov xwm txheej kom muab sijhawm rau cov neeg saib kom npaj tau los saib qhov xwm txheej
Kauj Ruam 9. Ua tib zoo saib lwm cov ntawv ntawm ntau hom kev txhaj tshuaj, xws li kaw qhov nrawm lossis taug qab txhaj tshuaj
Pom zoo li cas tus kws sau ntawv siv cov ntawv sau luv luv tshwj xeeb los tsim cov duab tshwj xeeb lossis lub sijhawm ntawm tus ua cim. Feem ntau cov kws sau ntawv tsuas yog siv cov ntawv sau thaum lawv xav tias nws yog qhov tseem ceeb los sau lawv thiab yuav ua rau zaj dab neeg zoo dua.
- Piv txwv li, hauv “Pulp Fiction”, Tarantino qhib qhov xwm txheej nrog sau tseg:
- Qhov no qhia tias lub koob yees duab yuav txav nrog cov neeg tua neeg thaum lawv taug kev, tsim kom muaj huab cua zoo li txav ntawm lub vijtsam.
EXT. APARTMENT BUILDING PAGE - MORNING
Vincent thiab Jules, hauv lawv cov tsho ntev ntev dai rau hauv pem teb, taug kev hla lub tshav puam ntawm qhov zoo li lub tsev zoo li tsev Hollywood chav tsev nyob.
Khaws TRACK ib sab ntawm lawv.
Ntu 2 ntawm 3: Sau Screenplay
Kauj Ruam 1. Xav txog cov tswv yim dab neeg
Ib txoj hauv kev zoo tshaj los ua qhov no yog xav txog cov yeeb yaj kiab uas koj xav pom ntawm qhov screen. Koj puas nyiam qee yam, xws li kev lom zem ua yeeb yam, ua yeeb yaj kiab, lossis txaus ntshai? Xav txog kev tsim cov yeeb yaj kiab raws cov yeeb yaj kiab uas koj nyiam. Yuav muaj, koj yuav pom ntau ntxiv txog hom uas koj mob siab rau thiab koj txoj kev mob siab rau yuav qhia hauv cov xwm txheej uas koj tsim.
- Koj tseem tuaj yeem xav txog kev nco thaum yau uas ib txwm ua rau koj haj yam ua neeg laus lossis muaj kev paub dhau los ua neeg laus uas koj ib txwm xav txog.
- Tej zaum koj yuav raug coj mus rau qee lub sijhawm, xws li hauv plawv nroog New York hauv '50s, lossis California hauv' 70s, thiab pib los nrog cov tswv yim dab neeg uas muaj ntau tus cim cuam tshuam nrog txhua lub sijhawm lossis teeb tsa.
- Sau txog koj qhov kev xav thiab qee tus neeg uas koj paub thiab nyiam. Qhov no yuav pab cov neeg mloog nkag siab koj zaj dab neeg.
Kauj Ruam 2. Txheeb xyuas tus txiv neej lossis poj niam
Tsim tus cwj pwm uas koj xav tias koj tuaj yeem piav qhia hauv 300 nplooj ntawv - ib tus neeg uas tuaj yeem tuav koj thiab cov neeg mloog. Xav txog cov neeg koj paub, cov neeg koj nyeem txog hauv daim ntawv, lossis cov neeg uas pom koj lub qhov muag ntawm txoj kev lossis tom khw muag khoom. Tus cwj pwm tseem ceeb tuaj yeem cuam tshuam nrog lub ntsiab lus, xws li kev ua tsov ua rog, kev nyob ib leeg, lossis kev hlub. Tsis tas li, koj tus yam ntxwv tseem ceeb tuaj yeem yog koj cov tshuaj tiv thaiv rau lub hom phiaj lossis hom ntsiab lus, xws li dab ntxwg nyoog nyob ib leeg uas xav tau kev hlub, lossis tus neeg siab mos muag.
- Tsim cov cim profile rau koj tus yam ntxwv tseem ceeb. Cov cim tus kheej yog cov lus nug-cov lus tshaj tawm uas qhia rau tus kws sau ntawv paub ntau ntxiv txog lawv tus yam ntxwv.
- Cov ntsiab lus koj sau ntawm tus cim profile yuav tsis tshwm hauv qhov xwm txheej. Tab sis kev paub txhua yam txog koj tus cim yuav pab koj xav tias lawv yog tib neeg tiag. Koj tuaj yeem nug koj tus kheej: "Kuv tus cwj pwm tseem ceeb yuav ua dab tsi hauv qhov xwm txheej no? Kuv tus cwj pwm tseem ceeb yuav hais dab tsi ntawm cov lus no? " thiab muaj kev ntseeg siab tias koj muaj cov lus teb uas yuav nce koj qhov xwm txheej.
Kauj Ruam 3. Tsim kab cav
Ib txoj kab yog koj kab lus ib kab lus xaus rau koj zaj dab neeg thiab feem ntau siv los ua cov cuab yeej lag luam, xws li thaum tus thawj coj hauv studio nug koj kom muab koj lub suab zoo tshaj plaws. Lub suab no yuav tsum yog koj kab ntawv. Cov kab ntawv nkag kuj tseem pab koj tsom koj cov ntawv ntawm qhov tseem ceeb tshaj plaws ntawm koj zaj dab neeg thiab ua kom nws taug qab. Cov kab cav feem ntau muaj peb ntu:
- Tus yeeb ncuab: Qhov no yog koj tus yam ntxwv tseem ceeb -tus neeg uas yuav yeej cov neeg mloog, lossis tsawg kawg ua rau cov neeg mloog hnov nws zoo li cas. Koj tuaj yeem muaj ntau dua ib tus cim tseem ceeb, tab sis txhua tus neeg ua yeeb yam sib txawv thiab muaj nws tus kheej qhov zoo. Piv txwv li, hauv "Thelma & Louise", tus ua yeeb yam yog Thelma thiab Louise, tab sis ob lub cim muaj lub hom phiaj sib txawv, txhawb siab, thiab xav hauv tsab ntawv.
- Antagonist: Nov yog koj tus cwj pwm tseem ceeb ntawm kev sib tw - ib tus neeg uas ib txwm tawm tsam tus neeg ua yeeb yam. Hauv "Thelma & Louise", tus yeeb ncuab yog tus txiv neej uas sim ua phem rau Thelma hauv ib lub bar. Txawm li cas los xij, tus yeeb ncuab hauv tsab ntawv dhau los ua "txoj cai lij choj" thaum Thelma thiab Louise dhau los ua neeg vwm rau tua tus txiv neej uas tau sim ua phem rau Thelma.
- Lub Hom Phiaj: Nov yog yam uas ua rau tus neeg ua yeeb yam mob siab rau thiab tsav kom mus ntxiv. Koj lub cim tseem ceeb xav tau dab tsi? Thelma thiab Louise xav tau yam sib txawv thaum pib ntawm tsab ntawv, tab sis tom qab tus yeeb ncuab tshwm sim, ob qho tib si tam sim no xav kom dim ntawm kev hem thawj ntawm tsev lojcuj. Ob lub cim no qhia txog lub hom phiaj sib koom uas ua rau lawv txav mus tom ntej hauv tsab ntawv.
- Cov kab ntawv ua tiav rau "Thelma & Louise" qhov xwm txheej tuaj yeem sau zoo li no: "Tus tub txib hauv Arkansas thiab tus niam tsev tau tua tus neeg raug tsim txom thiab khiav tawm hauv '66 Thunderbird". Nco ntsoov tias kab ntawv teev npe tsis siv cov cim lub npe, tab sis tsuas yog tsom mus rau lawv tus kheej lossis tus yam ntxwv.
Kauj Ruam 4. Sau ntawv kho mob
Hauv kev ua lag luam sau ntawv, kev kho mob yuav qhia rau tus thawj coj hauv studio paub yog tias koj lub tswv yim yuav tsim nyog tau txais nyiaj. Raws li thawj qhov xwm txheej ntawm qhov xwm txheej, kev kho mob kuj tseem tuaj yeem yog cov cuab yeej muaj txiaj ntsig rau kev nthuav qhia koj zaj dab neeg thiab xav txog nws thawj daim duab. Kev kho yog ob-rau tsib-nplooj ntawv xaus uas faib zaj dab neeg ua peb ntu:
- Lub npe zaj duab xis: Lub npe ntawm cov yeeb yaj kiab tuaj yeem hloov pauv ib ntus, tab sis nws yog lub tswv yim zoo los xav txog lub npe uas tuaj yeem nthuav qhia koj qhov kev ua yeeb yaj kiab. Cov npe zoo tshaj plaws feem ntau yog yooj yim thiab yooj yim, piv txwv li: "Thaum Harry ntsib Sally" lossis "Pulp Fiction". Lub npe yuav tsum tsis yog tsuas yog ua rau tus nyeem lossis saib pom paub txog koj qhov kev ua yeeb yaj kiab tag nrho, tab sis tseem ua rau lawv txaus siab txaus nyeem txuas ntxiv lossis saib. Zam lub npe ntev lossis tsis muaj txiaj ntsig, xws li cov npe uas yuav tsum siv tus nyuv. Thaum nws feem ntau yog siv rau cov yeeb yaj kiab loj (tshwj xeeb yog ntu txuas ntxiv), siv cov nyuv tuaj yeem qhia tau tias koj lub tswv yim tsis ua kom pom tseeb.
- Kab kab: Siv kab cav koj tau tsim hauv cov kauj ruam dhau los thiab muab tso rau thaum pib ntawm kev kho mob.
- Cov Lus Tseeb: Nthuav cov kab cav kom suav nrog cov npe ntawm cov cim, cov ntsiab lus luv luv txog lawv tus kheej, thiab lub tswv yim yooj yim ntawm yuav ua li cas lawv tau txais los ntawm A mus rau point B hauv zaj dab neeg. Piv txwv li, cov lus piav qhia rau Thelma & Louise”tuaj yeem sau zoo li no:“Tus niam tsev maj mam, Thelma, tau mus nrog nws tus phooj ywg Louise, tus ua haujlwm tawv ncauj, mus nuv ntses hnub so. Txawm li cas los xij, lawv txoj kev hloov pauv mus rau hauv kev sib tw nrog cov tub ceev xwm thaum Louise tua thiab tua tus txiv neej uas tau sim ua phem rau Thelma hauv ib lub bar. Louise txiav txim siab mus rau Mexico thiab Thelma ua raws nws. Ntawm txoj kev, Thelma poob rau hauv kev hlub nrog tus tub hluas tau ntxim hlub hu ua J. D. thiab cov neeg tshawb nrhiav pom zoo rau lawv cov teeb meem sim yaum ob leeg kom tig lawv tus kheej ua ntej lawv txoj hmoo tsis hloov pauv."
- Kev kho kuj tuaj yeem suav nrog cov lus luv luv ntawm kev sib tham thiab piav qhia. Txawm li cas los xij, lub hom phiaj tseem ceeb tseem ceeb los piav qhia tag nrho cov ntsiab lus ntawm zaj dab neeg.
Kauj Ruam 5. Qhia txog qhov xwm txheej
Nov yog thaum koj tsom mus rau tus qauv ntawm qhov xwm txheej. Cov xwm txheej piav qhia yog phau ntawv qhia rau koj qhia koj zaj dab neeg kom zoo. Qhov ntev ntawm tsab ntawv feem ntau suav nrog 50-70 scenes. Txhua qhov xwm txheej yuav tsum muaj teeb tsa thiab qee yam uas tau tshwm sim vim yog koj tus yam ntxwv, lossis qee yam uas tshwm sim los ntawm koj tus cwj pwm. Cov xwm txheej 50-70 yuav tsum yog qhov tseem ceeb ntawm koj zaj dab neeg. Feem ntau qhov kev tshuaj ntsuam puv ntev yog 100-120 nplooj ntawv ntev, thiab tau muab faib ua peb yam:
- Txoj Cai 1 yog kwv yees li 30 nplooj ntawv ntev thiab yuav nthuav qhia cov chaw nyiam, cim, thiab xwm txheej. Cov xwm txheej nthuav, lossis cov xwm txheej uas txav koj tus yeeb yam mus rau tom ntej, feem ntau yog 10 txog 15 nplooj ntawv ntev hauv qhov kev ua yeeb yaj kiab.
- Txoj Cai 2 yog ntev txog 60 nplooj ntawv thiab yog lub ntsiab lus ntawm koj zaj dab neeg. Nov yog qhov uas tus yeeb yam cim nws lub hom phiaj thiab ntsib ntau yam teeb meem uas tawm tsam nws lub hom phiaj thiab lub hom phiaj. Cov teeb meem lossis teeb meem no yuav mob zuj zus tuaj, lossis lub hom phiaj ntawm tus neeg ua yeeb yam yuav dhau los ua nyuaj kom ua tiav. Yuav tsum muaj kev nruj nruj uas txuas ntxiv mus ntxiv hauv ib nrab thib ob.
- Txoj Cai 3 feem ntau luv dua Txoj Cai 1, uas yog kwv yees li 20-30 nplooj ntawv. Ntawm no koj yuav tsim qhov kawg ntawm zaj dab neeg-tus neeg ua yeeb yam zaum kawg kom ua tiav nws lub hom phiaj. Qhov nce qib no tseem yuav txiav txim siab qhov xaus ntawm qhov xwm txheej. Thaum qhov teeb meem raug tshem tawm, tus yam ntxwv tseem ceeb tuaj yeem sawv ntawm nws tus nees thiab khiav mus rau hnub poob, lossis nws tuaj yeem tsoo nws tus nees.
- Nco ntsoov tias koj tsis tas yuav txiav txim siab pes tsawg qhov xwm txheej muaj nyob hauv koj cov yeeb yaj kiab kom txog thaum koj tau ua tiav thawj daim ntawv sau lossis cov ntawv ntxhib ntawm qhov screenplay. Txawm li cas los xij, khaws cov lej no hauv siab thaum koj sau. Feem ntau yuav, koj yuav tau txiav qhov xwm txheej thiab hloov kho nws los tsim cov xwm txheej uas tau teeb tsa ib puag ncig ntawm peb qhov kev ua.
Kauj Ruam 6. Tsim daim ntawv nrawm
Cov ntawv sau nrawm yog thaum koj sau cov ntawv tshuaj ntsuam sai thiab tsis txhob xav ntau txog qhov koj tab tom sau, thiab tsis txhob kho nws ua ntej. Qee tus kws sau ntawv sim sau cov ntawv no hauv ib lub lis piam, lossis ntau hnub. Yog tias koj pib nrog txoj kab cav ruaj khov, nqe lus, thiab kab lus piav qhia, koj tuaj yeem tsim cov cua ntsawj ntshab zog ib yam nkaus.
Ua kom pom tseeb ntawm kev tawm tswv yim thaum tsim koj daim ntawv flash. Nres kev sau ntawv kom quaj dhau lo lus xaiv lossis kho cov ntawv tuaj yeem cuam tshuam cov txheej txheem sau ntawv. Cia li sau nws
Kauj Ruam 7. Sau kom pom kev
Nco ntsoov tias koj tab tom sau rau kev tshaj xov xwm. Tsom ntsoov rau yam koj tuaj yeem pom lossis hnov ntawm lub vijtsam thiab tsis zoo li txhua yam yuav tsum tau piav qhia rau tus saib.
- Piv txwv li, hauv "Cov Ntawv Cuam Tshuam", Tarantino piav qhia kev siv tshuaj siv ob peb yam txheej txheem ze uas qhia qhov pom thiab hnov ntawm lub vijtsam.
- Tarantino tsis siv ntau qhov adjectives lossis cov lus piav qhia meej, tab sis qhov sib nrug ntawm tsab ntawv thiab cov lus piav qhia nws siv piav qhia qhov xwm txheej kom meej. Thaum koj siv cov lus piav qhia, ua rau lawv tshwj xeeb thiab ntxim nyiam li sai tau, xws li "spurt" ntau dua li "txav" thiab "nkoj" ntau dua li "caj npab."
- Tsis txhob ntshai tawm qhov chaw seem ntawm nplooj ntawv. Tarantino siv qhov chaw khoob no los qhia tias txhua qhov xwm txheej yuav ua rau cov neeg saib xav tsis thoob thiab xav tsis thoob. Cov neeg saib yuav muaj kev txaus siab ntawm kev siv tshuaj tsis tas yuav sau nws ntev lossis siv sijhawm tshuaj ntsuam ntau dhau.
QHOV CHAW - SYSTEM
Nkag mus rau hauv Vincent leeg.
ZOO TSHAJ PLAWS - QHOV TSEEB
Ua kom tawg thiab nce mus rau hauv qhov kev txhaj tshuaj, sib xyaw nrog tus heroin.
ZOO TSHAJ PLAWS - VINCENT THUMBS
Ntsuas lub plunger txhaj tshuaj.
Kauj Ruam 8. Txwv cov lus sib tham rau peb kab lossis tsawg dua
Kwv yees li 95% ntawm kev sib tham yuav tsum luv thiab ncaj. Kev siv monologues hauv kev sau ntawv kuj tseem ceeb thiab tuaj yeem ua tau zoo (zoo li Jules cov ntawv ib leeg hauv "Pulp Fiction" lossis Harry's monologue tom kawg ntawm "Thaum Harry Met Sally"). Txawm li cas los xij, feem ntau ntawm kev sib tham yuav tsum tau nthuav tawm zoo li ua si ping-pong. Zam kev hais lus uas zoo li lus paj lus. Kev tso dag uas ua ke nrog txhua lwm yam yuav ua rau qhov xwm txheej khiav tau zoo hauv qhov xwm txheej uas koj tsim.
- Piv txwv li, hauv qhov xwm txheej noj hmo hauv zaj yeeb yaj kiab "Thaum Harry ntsib Sally", Ephron siv kev sib tham los ua kom qhov xwm txheej ntws ib txwm muaj thiab qhia tus yam ntxwv tus yam ntxwv:
HARRY
Yog li, koj tau tawg nrog Sheldon li cas?
SALLY
Koj paub li cas peb tau tawg?
HARRY
Vim tias yog koj tsis ua, koj yuav tsis nrog kuv tam sim no, koj yuav nyob nrog Sheldon tus Muaj Hwj Chim Loj.
SALLY
Ib, kuv tsis tau ntsib koj. Qhov thib ob, nws tsis yog koj li lag luam yog tias ob peb leeg tawg.
HARRY
Yog lawm, koj hais yog lawm. Kuv tsis xav paub vim li cas.
SALLY
Nyob rau hauv rooj plaub koj xav tsis thoob, peb tawg vim nws khib heev thiab vim tias kuv muaj Hnub ntawm Lub Limtiam panties.
HARRY
(ua lub suab nrov nrov)
cuam tshuam. Hnub ntawm lub lim tiam panties?
SALLY
Yog lawm Cov ris hauv qab muaj cov npe ntawm hnub ntawm lub lim tiam sau rau lawv, Kuv xav tias lawv ntxim hlub - thiab muaj ib hnub, nws hais rau kuv, koj tsis txhob hnav hnub Sunday. Nws ua tsis txaus ntseeg. Hnub Sunday nyob qhov twg? Hnub Sunday ploj mus qhov twg? Thiab kuv hais rau nws, tab sis nws tsis ntseeg nws.
HARRY
Dab tsi?
SALLY
Lub Hoobkas tsis tau sau hnub Sunday.
Kauj Ruam 9. Tsim kev sib tham sib txawv rau txhua tus ua cim
Koj tus cwj pwm yog tus nyob thiab ua pa ntawm tus kheej. Yog li ua kom lawv cov kev sib tham cuam tshuam nrog lawv tus kheej, keeb kwm yav dhau, thiab kev xav ntawm lub neej. Cov tub ntxhais hluas loj hlob hauv Jakarta, piv txwv li, yuav tsis muaj tus qauv hais lus zoo ib yam thiab lus slang zoo li cov poj niam laus uas nyob hauv Surabaya xyoo 1960. Lawv qhov kev sib tham yuav tsum zoo li kev sib tham uas tus neeg tiag yuav hais.
- Nws yog qhov tseem ceeb los tsim kev sib tham tus yam ntxwv yog tias ntau dua ib tus ua cim tau tham tib lub sijhawm hauv ib qho xwm txheej (uas feem ntau cov xwm txheej yuav muaj). Hauv "Thelma & Louise", Khouri muab txhua tus yam ntxwv sib txawv qauv hais lus thiab lus slang los qhia lawv qhov kev xav thiab kev xav sib txawv thaum lawv ob leeg nyob hauv tib qho xwm txheej.
- Tsis txhob sau tej yam uas pom tseeb. Kev sib tham yuav tsum muaj peev xwm qhia ntau yam ntxiv ntawm ib lub sijhawm. Kev sib tham uas tsuas yog qhia tus nyeem ntawv txog tus yam ntxwv keeb kwm yav dhau los lossis tsuas yog ua haujlwm los teb cov lus nug tus cwj pwm tsis txaus los ua qhov xwm txheej. Kev sib tham noj hmo hauv "Thaum Harry ntsib Sally" tsis yog txoj hauv kev yooj yim rau ob tus cim los tham. Qhov tseeb, zaj dab neeg Sally qhia Harry qhia nws qhov kev xav ntawm kev sib raug zoo thiab nws tus kheej lub tswv yim txog kev sib raug zoo thiab kev ncaj ncees.
- Yog tias koj yuav siv cov lus monologue hauv koj qhov kev ua yeeb yaj kiab, tsuas yog siv nws ib zaug lossis ob zaug hauv txhua qhov xwm txheej thiab ua rau qhov tshwm sim muaj txiaj ntsig. Koj tus monologue yuav tsum ci ntsa iab thiab tsim nyog rau kev txhim kho zaj dab neeg thiab/lossis kev txhim kho tus cwj pwm.
- Nws yog qhov ntxias kom ua tus cim lub suab "zoo nkauj" siv cov lus qub, tshwj xeeb tshaj yog tias koj tab tom sau zaj yeeb yaj kiab uas yog lub sijhawm lossis keeb kwm keeb kwm. Nco ntsoov tias koj tus cwj pwm tseem yuav tsum zoo li tus neeg tiag tiag rau cov neeg mloog niaj hnub no. Yog li tsis txhob dai rau ntawm kev siv cov lus nyuaj uas tsis haum rau cov cim hauv koj qhov xwm txheej.
Kauj Ruam 10. Nkag mus rau qhov xwm txheej lig thiab xaus thaum ntxov
Tsis txhob ntxias kom sau dua koj tus cwj pwm, teeb tsa, lossis piav qhia qhov xwm txheej. Kev sau cov yeeb yaj kiab tsis tsom mus rau cov ntsiab lus thiab ntau ntxiv txog qhov xaus qhov tshwm sim thaum ntxov yog li cov neeg mloog yuav xav txuas ntxiv saib nws. Ib txoj hauv kev zoo yog txiav tawm thawj kab lus kawg thiab hauv kab lus. Yog tias qhov xwm txheej tseem tuaj yeem ua haujlwm yam tsis muaj ob kab lus no, rho tawm lawv.
Piv txwv li, hauv “Pulp Fiction”, Tarantino xaus ntau qhov xwm txheej ua ntej lub sijhawm tseem ceeb, xws li thaum ob tus neeg tua neeg tau tua lub hom phiaj lossis thaum tus neeg muaj zog ntaus rau ib tus neeg rau hauv av. Tom qab ntawd nws txiav lub sijhawm tseem ceeb ncaj qha mus rau qhov xwm txheej tshiab. Qhov no ua rau kev nqis tes ua hauv zaj dab neeg ntws mus tau zoo thiab cov neeg mloog xav paub ntau ntxiv
Kauj Ruam 11. Muab nws cov kev pheej hmoo loj thiab lub hom phiaj
Ib yam uas ua rau tib neeg nyiam saib yeeb yaj kiab yog qhov koj tuaj yeem qhia cov xwm txheej tseem ceeb thiab cov duab hauv hom loj. Cov no tseem raug hu ua "teeb tsa cov khoom". Teeb cov khoom feem ntau yog cov yeeb yaj kiab uas muaj kev cuam tshuam zoo uas ua rau pom kev zoo. Rau cov ntaub ntawv ntawm feem ntau cov yeeb yaj kiab ua yeeb yaj kiab, qhov no yog ua nrog kev ua pauj. Txawm tias hauv zaj yeeb yaj kiab hais txog ob tus neeg sib tham hauv lwm qhov chaw sib txawv ("Thaum Harry ntsib Sally") lossis txog ob tus poj niam khiav ("Thelma & Louise"), yuav tsum muaj qhov pheej hmoo txaus thiab lub hom phiaj rau cov cim.
- Harry thiab Sally ob leeg tab tom nrhiav kev hlub thiab phooj ywg, thiab tom qab 10 xyoo ntawm kev phooj ywg, lawv thaum kawg paub tias yam lawv tab tom nrhiav yog nyob ntawm lawv xub ntiag. Yog li, lawv txoj kev pheej hmoo siab heev vim tias lawv txoj kev phooj ywg tuaj yeem xaus yog tias lawv txoj kev sib raug zoo tsis zoo thiab lub hom phiaj tseem siab dua vim tias lawv ob leeg xav ua tiav lub hom phiaj tib yam: kev hlub.
- Thelma thiab Louise kuj muaj kev pheej hmoo siab thiab lub hom phiaj. Cov xwm txheej sib txawv hauv zaj yeeb yaj kiab tso ob tus cim hauv cov xwm txheej uas tuaj yeem ua rau lawv raug kaw hauv tsev loj cuj, thiab qhov ntawd yog qhov pheej hmoo siab. Yog li, lawv lub hom phiaj tseem ceeb yog zam kev cai lij choj thiab tawm ntawm lawv qhov xwm txheej tam sim no thiab ua tiav kev ywj pheej.
Kauj Ruam 12. Xyuas kom tseeb tias qhov xwm txheej uas koj tsim muaj pib, nruab nrab, thiab xaus
Txhua yam yuav xaus rau hauv peb txoj cai. Koj qhov kev tshuaj ntsuam, tsis muaj teeb meem li cas tshwj xeeb lossis txaus siab rau cov ncauj lus, yuav tsum haum rau peb yam. Yuav tsum muaj Txoj Cai 1 nrog cov xwm txheej txaus nyiam, Txoj Cai 2 qhov chaw tus yeeb yam lub hom phiaj tau qhia, nrog rau nce kev tsis sib haum lossis teeb meem uas tiv thaiv nws kom ua tiav nws lub hom phiaj, thiab Ua 3 nrog qhov nce siab thiab xaus ntawm zaj dab neeg.
Ntu 3 ntawm 3: Rov Ntsuam Xyuas Scenario
Kauj Ruam 1. Txheeb xyuas koj li xwm txheej
Tam sim no koj cov yeeb yaj kiab tau tsim nyob rau hauv tsawg kawg ib daim ntawv, lossis ntau daim ntawv sau. Txawm li cas los xij, ua ntej koj nyeem nws rau lwm tus lossis xa nws mus rau tus thawj coj xav kawm, koj yuav tsum txheeb xyuas tias koj cov ntawv sau tau raug ua tiav.
- Txheeb xyuas seb tsab ntawv pib nrog "Fade in", lub npe ntawm qhov xwm txheej, thiab kev piav qhia ntawm qhov chaw.
- Nco ntsoov tias tsab ntawv muaj ntau kab lus piav qhia rau txhua tus ua cim, tshwj xeeb tshaj yog tias qhov no yog thawj zaug uas tus ua cim tshwm hauv tsab ntawv.
- Nco ntsoov tias txhua tus cim lub npe thiab lub suab yuav tsum yog cov peev txheej.
- Xyuas kom tseeb tias txhua cov lus txib tau ua tiav hauv kab ntawv.
- Txheeb xyuas qhov hloov pauv, xws li "Txiav rau", "Fade to", lossis "Dissolve to" ntawm cov xwm txheej.
- Nco ntsoov tias muaj ntawv sau nyob rau hauv qab ntawm nplooj ntawv uas hais tias (TSEEB) yog tias nplooj ntawv raug txiav tawm hauv nruab nrab ntawm kev sib tham lossis qhov xwm txheej.
- Txheeb cov naj npawb nplooj ntawv ntawm sab xis saum toj ntawm txhua nplooj ntawv.
Kauj Ruam 2. Nyeem koj qhov xwm txheej nrov nrov
Hauv kev ua yeeb yaj kiab ua lag luam, thaum koj tau muag koj cov yeeb yaj kiab, qhov kev nyeem ntawv no yuav tshwm sim ntawm ib lub rooj puag ncig nrog cov neeg ua yeeb yam thiab tus ua yeeb yam uas tau raug xaiv los ua lub cim hauv koj qhov kev ua yeeb yaj kiab.
